Well that was certainly an interesting take on the bell test

damnit. the story is great and really funny sometimes. i hoped to read more chapter.

Type your review uchiha will always be a uchiha a traitor

J'aime beaucoup.

Elle joue double jeu pour qui ?

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Continue it soon

This has been a fun fic. I've liked the Seizasha, Hinata, and Hanabi thing.

Tenten, Ino, and the others? No so much. The spirits were introduced, but they were never given a chance to shine yet.

I can see why Naruto would have issues with the money/business end of things. He is 11. I can see him needing an adult proxy of some sort for most business stuff or at least a genin front. It doesn't have to be the locals disliking him due to the 9 tails bit.

one major bit that I'm disappointed in is the Sasuke bashing. It was a tad overdone and with a twin sister some of his outlook and protective instincts might be different. Sasuke could be thrilled that Seizasha is pretty much paired up with Naruto. Normally, he dislikes Naruto and it takes awhile for him to get to the working friendship stage.

Seizasha is Sasuke's twin sister. You've vastly underplayed that. That could have been a reason to bring Sasuke into things and somewhat heal him.

The only girl that Sasuke could safely pair up with would be Tenten or maybe Anko. All the others come with clan issues.

The point is Sasuke could be happy that sis would be rebuilding/repopulating the clan or at least bloodline. Sasuke could have evolved to have protective brotherly feelings towards most of the girls.

Sorry, but the solely focused on training and avenging Sasuke has been done to death and with a well adjusted sister well you had the perfect excuse to tone that down and redirect things.

Hell, you could have had Sasuke learn the henjutsu and get talked into practicing it with Tenten, Sakura, or Ino.

I couldn't tell if Seizasha was having to report to her other brother or Danzo. Danzo would likely feel mixed. He likes how Sasuke is mindlessly training and all that. He knows that Sasuke is far more of a flight risk. All the others? They are pretty much a family and it is rather obvious that that Seizasha, Hinata, and Hanabi would likely end up with Naruto. Its too soon to tell for the rest.

At first, disliked how you split the girls up, but then I could understand things. The girls are generally about chunin level or have at least a few chunin/jounin skills that they've worked for. That you've split them up means that each team has someone with those talents and can get their teammates started training more.

This all a massive bonus and win as far as Danzo would see it. Instead of ninja brats training for the bare minimums, they are at where he'd want the academy standards to be at.

If it was her estranged brother though, well he might be coming to kill them in the future or just keeping tabs to troll them in the future. Itachi the spying troll with a sibling complex. Don't you want to see Itachi popup and attempt to play the overprotective brother card when Naruto is using his henjutsu skills on her?

I'm stunned that Kakashi didn't automatically pass the two for the nude clone thing. Screw team work. He can teach that to them later. He has here priceless pervy entertainment gold.

love this. favved and folowed.

Love this! Keep going!

I really liked your story. Sorry if you're really sick of hearing this but I think it is worth continuing, and I hope you'll update soon, or hand it someone else if you can't write anymore. Hope to read more soon.

Hehe, it really didn't settle the bet since it could be either side of the argument

What's with the top/bottom form comments?

Kinda hoping for another line or even a Lemon

So danzo is a pain in the ass for Seizasha

Just FYI: you put the same part twice in the first paragraph
Only issue I have is that you keep teasing with the fun naruto is having with them after the part with hinata in an earlier chapter
So ino is now part of the group, though I wonder why none of the spirits, Angel, or demon noticed naruto had a demon inside him