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blasrt85 chapter 75 . 6/26 Just rereading All of the fragments and in Say My Name! I liked the idea of Xander having money from reselling something he got legitimately, It filled a common plot hole with something that makes sense. Ensign America, Chaos and Red heads, Two's a Crowd with its later installments are some of my favorite Fragments of Yours. There are of Course many others. |
Ashen Author chapter 20 . 6/24 I like the version of Buffy we see here, however briefly. And I might look up the game to see what loophole he might have used to win. |
Quietlovingman chapter 62 . 6/23 "AN: I have no idea where I was going with this. " - Well, with the title, and the blood oath, I assume there would be some interesting knock on effects from making an elf your "Blood Brother" Dobby would be prevented from bludgering Harry to near death, Torpo might be able to interrogate Dobby with the Help of the Hogwarts elves. Torpo would be possibly far more capable than a normal elf. Harry may even be able to learn House Elf magic, considering that he spent the vast majority of the last ten years pretending to be one. In addition having the Griffindor Study Group working across all age groups in the house would probably wind up with record setting end of year results. Much better training for the second years, and quite possibly uncovering Lockheart as a fraud and revealing the Diary early. |
eilidhdawn chapter 52 . 5/7 Wouldn't mind seeing where this goes |
eilidhdawn chapter 36 . 5/7 Hmmm is there more of this? |
Guest chapter 73 . 5/5 Keitaro, not Kietaro |
Guest chapter 65 . 5/5 principal, not principle |
Guest chapter 63 . 5/5 guessed by card - guessed my card |
Guest chapter 63 . 5/5 " removing it's chance to exist, did you unmake it's soul" its, not it's |
Guest chapter 55 . 5/5 bento, not benitos |
Guest chapter 66 . 5/4 Hogsmead - Hogsmeade |
Guest chapter 11 . 5/4 Misspelled name: Pomphrey - Pomfrey |
Guest chapter 19 . 5/4 Slitting time I guess... or rather I hope :-) |
Guest chapter 18 . 5/4 "four years" five years, not four |
Guest chapter 18 . 5/4 " friends of other people" with |