No! You can't stop there! You need to make a follow up chapter in which he finally wakes up, and they get together!

a nice story but a sad ending i can't believe it ended that way

Holy shit this made me cry

IM CRYIN DUDE

I can appreciate the premis of this story and how it Is unique to all the other where they just meet up and fuck, BUT I REFUSE! I MUST NLOCK IT OUT! *rips off shirt* * shows of ermika tatoo* ERMIKA FOR LIFE!
*goes into emergency husk mode*

;-;

This is... Amazing!

This story is amazing yet at the same time, angsty and I need a shoulder to cry on and let my feels just let it go! Looks like I'm a fan of AruAni, EreRi, and EreMika now xD thanks to this story :)

I didn't see any mistakes, too. So I rate this a hundred over ten and I like how you portrayed Mikasa, even though it really hurts her, she's doing it because she wants to protect him.

Looking forward for more stories!

- Scynthia Deathscythe

This... is actually pretty damned good! Beautiful work!

*sniffs* this made me cry

That was a really good story, and it was sad to think that they could not be together. If you could maybe give me an explanation as to why they could not be together, or why they could not talk about such lives would be much appreciated. Good story, hope to hear more of you.
Shogun out.

That can't be it... THERE NEEDS TO BE MOOOORE. PLEASE DO MORE!

no sequel?

it'd be nice if there's a sequel for this. :)