Reviews for The Escort
obsessedwithall06 chapter 93 . 6/5
Okay, this is classic post partum, Robin's situation and personality might play a role in some of her feelings but that doesn't mean she doesn't have post partum. I just want them all to be okay
obsessedwithall06 chapter 89 . 6/5
Okay, Robin seriously need professional help. She had post partum and it's not her fault but she needs help to overcome it
obsessedwithall06 chapter 87 . 6/5
Also I really hate Loretta here, like I understand her concern but at the same time she needs to learn sensitively
obsessedwithall06 chapter 86 . 6/5
Part of Robin's reaction could be post-partum depression, a lot of new moms with post partum want nothing to do with their babies. What Robin really needs is help, shes had so much trauma and issues in her raising, plus she never really wanted this baby. I think therapy would really help her.
obsessedwithall06 chapter 78 . 6/5
I still really like the story. I like how you are handling the pregnancy. Usually with baby stories I just stop reading, but I'm glad I didn't for your story. I also like how you ahd her past come out, such a great story
obsessedwithall06 chapter 73 . 6/5
okay literally a C-section is a terrible idea, like there's a reason they only do it in emergencies. The recovery is really tough, especially with a new baby and it's almost impossible to ever give birth naturally after that. No doctor should agree to that
obsessedwithall06 chapter 55 . 6/5
This chapter is so sweet, I love Barney and Robin on Christmas and this was a really sweet year. I love how you are developing their relationship even though they are apart a lot, and how you included the explosion with Robin was really good. It's didn't feel like it was there just to create drama, it felt real and natural. And, even though this story is really long so far, you've keep it really good. I wish I could write as good (well?) as you do.
obsessedwithall06 chapter 51 . 6/4
2 things
1. I really like your story so far
2. I completely agree with you about the finale. For me its didn't ruin the whole show bc I just didn't watch it, about a year or two before I watched the show my dad reccomend I watch it but not the finale, bc it ruined the whole idea of the show. I watched the scenes with Tracy but not the other parts. He gave me a brief summery of it and even before I watched the show I thought it was a terrible ending. The whole premise of the show is rooted in the fact that Ted and Robin don't end up together, that the mother is like perfect for him. And the voice over drives that point home. Plus I loved Barney and Robin and the fact that they divorced them and killed off the mother just bc they are wanted Ted and Robin together is crazy
obsessedwithall06 chapter 9 . 6/3
So far I really like this fic, many HIMYM fics I find boring and uninteresting but this one is really unique and well written
Fanmaniaa chapter 120 . 12/21/2019
AWW. I loved it, but I can't believe I just spent a whole day reading a 120-chapter fic.
AraelDranoth chapter 5 . 5/20/2019
Great stuff and I like how you tied it back into the events of the show.
AraelDranoth chapter 4 . 5/20/2019
Good stuff. They're both quite OC but in my opinion it does make sense since they didn't meet under the original circumstances.
AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 5/20/2019
Good stuff although again the writing needs some minor improvement and beefing up. Lots of single, lonely lines out there and not enough substantial paragraphs.
AraelDranoth chapter 2 . 5/20/2019
The writing isn't bad but could do with some beefing up. Other than that a solid effort and I am curious to see where it goes.
AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 5/20/2019
A little OC but then again I've tried about thirty of these HIMYM fanfics and they all bored me after the first few paragraphs. My interest remains peaked with this one so I plan to continue.
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