good shit yo

can you make more of this awesome story. i love to read aboy komatsu and zebura.
the smut was great i want to read more.
from a new fan.
:D

Yes...yes...i love it... and I learned a new word...i love this so much you have no idea, plus it was HOT! YES~! Thank you so much~! This was wonderful~!

Oh, wow. This was sooo good! You hit kinks i didn't even know i had! You managed to create such a good tension, i was on the edge if my seat the whole time. I espeacially liked how you treated the question of consent, i wouldn't have enjoyed this half as much otherwise. Good job, i really enjoyed myself reading this! Thank you!

Dear Holy Goddess of Yaoi... This... This is a fucking masterpiece... I cant- I can't even begin...
You are just amazing for creating this. I have so much but right now I'm breathless... This fic is amazing

Oh my God! that was incredibly hot! I loved Zebra's dirty talk and how they both obviously enjoyed it so much. And what I really liked was the consent given in the beginning, without it, I wouldn't have enjoyed reading it half as much. Really good work, thank you!

holy eff that was hot. just. so. hot. O_O

Great one-shot, i laugh at the ending, i guess he really is more adapted to Zebra!

wow... you should make this a story not just a one-shot. its that good, i swear.