Childhood bully wants you to be his psychotherapist, lovely. This is one of the rare times that I genuinely dislike Draco, he's just very annoying and frankly pathetic.

I loved this!

Oh no why didn't u make it longer? It was so freaking exciting and i would have loved for hermione and draco to meet up again! But well... Really sad story at the same time, liked how you made Draco though, with some feelings instead of his usual icy persona!

"'Ooh! Well spotted, Granger. Ten points to Gryffindor! The know-it-all strikes again!' He sneered at her sardonically."

Oh, man. That was so funny! I totally lost it for like five minutes!

Anyway, I really love the character choices in this story. I especially liked that Scorpius wasn't a personality double of Draco. I've never seen Timid!Scorpius, but I'm a huge fan now.

Are you planning to write more on this? It's awesome!

-Abbs

I love this. Your characterizations are amazing. Ron and the children are very well-written, and Hermione is exactly how I imagine she would be, especially at the end. That last image is so chilling and memorable. Draco's misery is depicted very well, and unfortunately this seems rather a believable future for him... For some reason Astoria's kindness made the whole situation sadder. Your writing is very good, and I like how you maintain the balance between lighthearted and dark in this. I think the ending is perfect. Actually this whole story is pretty much perfect.