Ah yes, more perfection... how do you do it? Beautifully written... smiling now at random strangers, feeling warm and right.

oh my god! so adorable and wonderful and the picture you're painting, it's amazing.
(also I've just realized that my last review might sound negative to people who don't know I've been reading all your fics for the past hours... well, it was meant in a damn that was painful pls shoot me or wait let me just move on to your next fic because that was amazing and I need more)

Noooo make it less perfect I think you broke my feelings

This makes me feel happy and sad at the same time. I like how you wrote it in the second person and did it beautifully. How you captured their love perfectly, and the despair of the war. How you managed to make it feel bittersweet. How you made it sad, and yet radiant. It's beautiful. Fantastic. Gorgeous. Magnificent. Splendid. Amazing.

This was so, so beautiful (as always). It was incredibly bitter sweet and adorable and humorous all at once. The characterisation was spot-on and different themes (childhood coming to a close, falling in love, etc.) were brilliantly woven together. Okay, I don't know if the themes are accurate, but that's what I got. I suck at themes :p Keep up the fantastic work!

That was absolutely completely wonderful! wow. There really isnt enough happy Jily, these days, but this was just amazing, it completely made my day and was incredibly well written, thank you!

This was beautiful 3
Honestly, I really like this, I've been trying to write my own James/Lily fic, but I've got writers block Dx
Love this :D

A really beautiful, poetic piece :)

Loved it. It was very cute. Loved the ending. That was perfect. She fell so hard..