sighhhhhhhhh im never reading a fan fiction again

evil Conway, seems legit. xD

I like where you are going with Red's involvement. Refreshingly appropriate for the multiverse. :) This fanfiction just keeps getting better and better. :D

Oh, the plot thickens... Seems a tad bit sudden and strange though. I'm more used to reading stories that spend more words on inner thoughts and stuff than dialogue... but anyways. Cool, first battle too, I like this Zach character. :)

Btw I think I miss read something in the last chapter when I made my last comment, Tobias does not seem like TOO much of a jerk. He is a little bit though lol. Even if you do play up Tobias having a bad attitude I won't mind though, a rivalry of this type between Ash and Tobias could be cool.

lol what you did with expanding Tobias's character. Starting a battle right off the bat and stuff he said. I always got the impression that he was just a little bit full of himself with comments like "to think I'm using my second Pokemon..."

Only complaint is that I think you made him a tad bit too much of a jerk, specifically in how he just walked away when he did. but it's hard to tell since we don't know much about him anyways, plus the story is just getting started.

Interesting set up so far. :)

I am impressed that Bianca, Barry, AND Morrison made the champion league. I've always considered all three of them to be somewhat of a wild card when it comes to actual potential of success in the Pokemon Anime world. But fanfiction is fanfiction and all three of them being there is mostly a pleasant surprise, lmao Barry and Bianca being in the same room.

Glad to see you're not neglecting Ash's Unova Pokemon and rivals. :)

Lol Youngster Joey actually made it to the finals? Cool xD. Rattata vs Pikachu sounds epic.

*claps* I did always think Brock would end up with a nurse Joy. Conway's where he belongs. Great story. Write another one soon!

It finally ended bravo great story:p

Secret weapon? Dang your cliff hangers! Is the secret technique the chidori?

Secret Weapon?

story is good. don't like it that all the pokemon have evolved. most of ash's pokemon don't want to evolve. also misty only cares about ash. revealed in orange island series twice and when ash has to leave misty.

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!?

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! PLOT TWIST! UPDATE!

That Team Rocket poem rocked! I like pearlshipping. Nice. Rocketshipping yay! Champion League is still going. Win Ash!

Ho-Oh boy or girl?
Also why is Ash asking himself about his extended time?