I really appreciate that you're writing Cho/Parvati as a couple that are older, because (as you so astutely mentioned) there are so few representations in media of couples older than their mid-thirties. If the couple is presented in media as older, it's seen as tragic due to whatever the backstory explains. I love that they love each other, and support each other in aging without going too deep into angst. In short, great piece! Can't wait to read more of your work.

The contrast between the description in the second paragraph to the ending sentence was probably what I liked most about this drabble - great job! I like how you showed the graphicness of Pansy's fantasies. Another drabble nicely done!

Ungh you write so great. (I don't think it helps that Katie is one of my favourite characters...)
But wow. Your ability to create a whole story in only a few lines is so brilliant and you can see Alicia's love for Katie here, in the way she dreams of Katie and the [blood and broken glass and broken hearts].
Poetic and sad and wonderful as usual. Good job!

This is so short but so brilliant and agh. I love how, in four lines, you manage to tell almost a whole story, about Lavender and how she escapes to those bars to find someone like Parvati. The ending is perfect. You write so poetically, too. This is lovely prose, good job!

I like that not all Slytherins /like/ Crucio-ing their fellow peers. You gave Daphne a new look and I like that. I will admit that I've never read this pairing before, and now I want to read more of it :3
Flawless, and Tracey comforting Daphne is just perfect. Good job!

Really cute. Keep writing

Amusing. Keep writing

Amusing and cute. Keep writing

Yes it does sometimes. Nice work, keep updating

Sad and well written. Keep writing

I have a soft spot for this pairing. And this is a good reminder of why.

Seriously, this was lovely. Poor Pansy cannot resist even small traces of veela charm! XD

That second paragraph... Not gonna lie. It was incredibly hot. And I love that Pansy thought of Vic as a blood traitor. Very true to character! And it makes the appeal of these two that much stronger! Gotta love a good forbidden romance... even if said romance only exists in Pansy's head!

Sad and well written. Keep writing/updating

Darling. What the hell? This is not okay because ParvatiLavender, and heartbreak, and I can't even English right now. D:

Seriously, though, you broke my heart with just a few words, and I love you for it.

This was so simple, so raw. And the way you write. It's so poetic with actually being poetry.

[ Lavender knows she's just another defeated
witch making love to a ghost.] I loved this line. It was the perfect way to tie up the drabble. It was painful and absolutely glorious.

This... What did you just do to me?

One second, it was all "Awh! Daphne is writing love letters! It's so precious!"

Then

[ Even in death, Su
makes her feel things more intensely than she's
ever felt before (and some sad part of Daphne
needs that).]

What was that?! Why did you just break me like that?!

But it was a wonderful heartbreak because this was so beautifully written, and I do regret reading it for even a second.

This was definitely interesting. Su Li's not a character I've read much about, so this was also new to me.

I like the little details you've add through out the piece, especially the first line when you describe Su's hair as dancing behind her. That creates a vivid picture in the reader's mind, it's also a nice description.

I didn't spot any SPaG mistakes either, and the sentences flowed nicely with no unnecessary words or descriptions.