...Wow...holy...wow...now *this*...THIS is the way that the story *should* have gone after the fall of Thessia. Absolutely brilliant. Thank you so very much for writing and sharing :)

Nicely written. Liara's concerns over melding right then are so perfectly natural. And the crying. So appropriate under the circumstances which just passed.

Amazing.

The way you are able to bring out all the emotions so well and make it all flow like water. still blows me away. i could feel Liara's pain and sorrow. it had me tearing up a little.

Then you throw in Shepard comforting her. God you play with my emotions so much. I love it.

Damn...that was great. Amazing one-shot as always.

Wow. That was incredible. I love your use of language and the way you capture Liara's emotions. Wonderful as always.

Absolutely beautiful. Superbly well written!

War is hell, and those who live through the fighting are often the worst affected.

Awesome