:D so cute..

Im gueessing this was the friends till the end episode..i cried durin this episode :') i loved it..

Great job :)

Aw! So good! I really like this, despite what you may say about your poems. Getting around to reading more of your stuff. 'Till later.

-KT

AW! SO CUTE! Nicely written! *Sighs and tears swell up in her eyes* I'm not going to cry. I'm not going to cry. *Tears fall down* Oh, why am I being sorry for myself? Anyway, enough about me. Continue writting things similar to this. Please? Pretty please? You write very good!

AW! SO CUTE! Nicely written! *Sighs and tears swell up in her eyes* I'm not going to cry. I'm not going to cry. *Tears fall down* Oh, why am I being sorry for myself? Anyway, enough about me. Continue writting things similar to this. Please? Pretty please? You write very good!

Very Beautiful work. It does bring out the emotions of the duel.
Comment about the description-Eh...I'm sure you've only watched the American Version, due to your comment about Pegasus...(I've watched the original; Let me just say, all he did was for a reason, and also...He told Dark Yugi during the duel through the television if he lost the shadow game(Dark Yugi KNEW it was Yami no Game, Pegasus declared it so at the beginning of the duel) he would have to go to the Duelist Kingdom Tourney. If Dark Yugi had agreed, most of what happened wouldn't have, such as Sugoroku's(grandpa's) soul being taken. But Dark Yugi kept pushing it, saying What if I refuse? and finally refused the penalty given him by Pegasus for losing the shadow game..so Pegasus made sure he couldn't refuse. It was Dark Yugi's fault, somewhat...or so that's the thought I've gotten..I KNOW people will flame me for this, but all flames given me will be used to set Bakura's head on fire, so nyah. _ I also protect Peggy-sama, so if you wanna burn him, you'll have to find him. :;runs off with Pegasus in her arms::
Keep writing _ you're very good.

WE! I HAVE A NEW CHIBI AISHA MUSE!(cAm, she's named Kida, and is a Neopet muse)

Nya anyway, I loved those poems! I just love the episodes where Yugi has to duel Joey, especially that song: " Closer than Brothers" in the first part; it made me cry *sniff sniff* (;_; to _) GREAT POETRY!

I was reading this and tears began to well up in my eyes. This is super good! I love it!

By the way, thanks for reviewing our fanfiction. If you get a chance, read some of our others, especially the pokemon/Ygo one.

Anyways, I seriously cried when I read this. It was so sweet! You write fantastic poetry! I hope to see more.

good, sis!

*sniffs* sad...but good. it very succinctly sums up the bond btwn the two. at least thats what i think.

hmm...the flames will be used on pegasus? that's a very good idea. sooo...*hands a flamethrower to amethyst* have fun! lol. i dont flame. i think its dumb, b/c we're entitled to write and post what we want to. but, i *can* give u the instrument of torture for use against that evil long-haired arrogant [censored word]. lol.

great chapter again, are you going to continue it? sure hope so! like maybe joey during yugi vs peggy erhm...3-5? round there? specially when yugi's in the shadow realm (GOD TAHT WAS SO SAD WHEN HE COLLAPSED!). anyway, i hope u continue, excellent work. ja ne!

WAAAAAHHHHHH! *sniff* *sniff* These two poems were so beautiful...WAAAAAAAAHHHHH! *Sob* *sniffle*

I'm ok now..

:)

really good i want the poem in Joey's POV! PLEASE write it!

O the humanity! That song was so touching! Did ya know you can download it? Good idea to make a story of it. i wonder y your the first...

Aww... that was sweet...

Silver: Nice Poem. As I recall, my favorite part of that episode was getting to see Yami cry.

Golden: You're a cruel, cruel creature, Silver.

Silver: Shut up, little Hikari, I'm a yami too, I'm allowed to be.

Golden: ;) You just want to be able to kiss those tears away...

Silver: I thought I told you to shut up.

This was good. I will certainly not flame it, because I like Pegasus! I wouldn't want him to burn!