That ritual was heavy bro. Holy. I wish we could explore serana’s Feeling more, I feel like they don’t get touched on muxh

Yet another amazing chapter. Actually, both chapters you added recently have been great. I'm loving how the story is going a little faster now, even while you've still kept in the smaller moments between Sithia and Serana. It's really nice seeing these characters bond and seeing how well they can support each other in so many different scenario's. I'm also looking forward to see if Serana gets more pushy about turning Sithia. I feel like her argument for wanting to turn her would be a fair one to make, one even Sithia couldn't just brush off. (And in my biased opinion, Sithia would be a badass vampire). Keep up the great writing!

Haven’t visited this site in years but saw you update and had to see how far the story had gotten. I loved their banter.

Thank you sm for the update!

I LOVE IT! please write more? do you have an IG specifically for your stories?

Another amazing chapter. Seriously, I'm loving this story, and I'm so glad you are still actively updating it. Cant wait to see where this story goes!

Love this story!

Loving this story and glad to see you updating again, cant wait for the next chapter.

An excellent chapter. I can't believe I didn't notice that this got updated sooner!

I realize this is more than likely a side hobby for you. But I love this story. I'm impressed on how well its written and I love the style of it. Reading new chapters makes my day and I hope to see more soon. There's so few fxf storeies even fewer good stories and rare golden ones good ones that are updated. I wish you best of health and maybe the inspiration to keep adding more to this till the end.

Thank you for the update XD

I loved it loved it loved it! I'm so glad Sithia and Paarthurnax get along hopefully she'll punch Delphine for telling her to kill him. It'll be great to see a conversation between Serana and Paarthurnax too.
So much to look forward to but Sithia and Valerica has got to be my most anticipated! :3

Been reading this for years, and I've loved every chapter! Keep it up!

Hey, so I started reading this story two days ago. This is AMAZING! I love Sithia's personality and how her relationship with Serana is developing. I think that the drinking-blood-giving-pleasure thing and how blood tastes differently according to the victim's emotions are very creative ideas that you put forth, even though they are very different from the fame - but that doesn't matter, that's why this is a story, not the game itself :)
Your portrayal of Delphine is exactly what I think of her and I like how Sithis despises the Blades and how she has a mind of her own. She is an incredibly complex character! Congratulations for writing such a complex story and such amazing, well-rounded characters. The plot itself is also very well written.
I really hope you can update soon! I'm looking forward to it!

Holy mother of God, this is an AMAZING story! I absolutely love everything about Sithia's personality, (I mean literally everything. From her insane side, to her romantic side, to her warrior side) and Serana was written exactly the way I had always imagined her! I'll admit that Serana's abilities seemed to powerful to me at the start, but you proved that while she was strong, she had just as many weaknesses. Their relationship is insanely well written, and you've done a great job with the progression of it. I'm really looking forward to when they get more intimate, seeing as you do so well with writing their emotions and reactions to some of the more romantic things. Then there's the plot of the story, which is equally awesome. I love that you didn't make the Dragonborn this "God on earth" character, and actually made it so she can get hurt easily—while also keeping a warrior side to her of course. Basically every character in this story is well written, not to mention the skillful writing moves that you have been demonstrating throughout the story. You truly have a gift for writing, and I can't thank you enough for using it to write this story. Easily one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I can only hope the next update is out soon. Keep up the great work! Don't forget to release a new chapter for your patiently waiting fans : )