Grande! la storia prende subito

that was good keep the chapters coming

Omg awesome story please continue to update, author-san

you went well but you ruined it with a real life country does not put reality together with the naruto universe that does not exist on that planet because it is another planet do not mention the real one imagines one that has nothing to do with the real one so country of bone example

Your story concept so far is brilliant your writing style is complete ass. I would highly suggest finding a beta to review and help you rewrite this story

New chapter please

Yo had potential, then it was like a tragedy, dragged on and convoluted, like you were just making shit up as you wrote it, and doing things just for doing them, one after another, ass I said potential but at the end just...no

I already lost the faith in see a new chapter of this story

CONTYYYYYYY PLISSSSS QUIERO SABER QUE PASA CON LA PELEA PERO SOBRE TODO QUIERO SABER QUE NUEVO SECRETO SERA REVELADO A NARUTO Y HINATA PLISSSSS NO TARDES EN SIBUR LA CONTYYYYY

That was awesome. But I was expecting Haru and Elie to show up while they were fighting Orochimaru. I really thought they were coming to help Naruto and his team.

I’m still clueless as to who were those two people the Uzumakis took from Danzo’s hideout during their attack on Koharu. I hope it’s Naruto’s parents.

I love what you did on team 7’s genin test. That was funny leaving Kakashi tied to a training post while his team went to Hokage’s office to report.

please update this story

Dude this is a great and awesome story but seriously you need to finish it.

Since they can't tell him they can just right a letter to him cause they won't be tell him so that's okay right