Very well done. Thank you for their story

Oh, I love this story! As you already know, I'm a sucker for stories that have a darkish, mysterious feel to them. When there's a bar involved and even some delicious smoking, my heart can't but melt.
The domestic vibe here is quite endearing, too.
In short, another great story of yours. Absolutely fitting for the current autumn mood.

Thus is beautifully done.