Reviews for Art is an Explosion, dattebayo! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please give naruto deidara's kekkei genkai |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() please give Naruto Deidara's kekkai genkai |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update, it's great |
![]() ![]() I hope you come back to "Art is ... ". |
![]() ![]() Ok you fucking cunt this is how it is that is a fucking ninja world not fucking ponys shiting out rainbows dumass... You basically said oh you can't use your fighting style without my mission approval that's just bullshit it hinders not only him majorly but also the team because he can not fight at full capacity it's bullshit, reatarted, and makes no fucking sense what so gods damn ever so I will say this as clearly as I can go fucking kill your self in a hole and take this pece of shit with you you fucking cunt ass RETARD |
![]() ![]() ![]() shame you gave up on the story |
![]() ![]() Good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() really love this awesome story cant wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously, they are disturbed because Naruto killed them with an explosion? It is rather fast if the explosion is strong enough... And they are shinobi, so they must know that they have to kill, especially Kurenai ... I'm disappointed in Kurenai's reaction, yah Shino and Hinata are shocked by the sight I can understand even if they are clan heirs and should already deeply understand what if the role of a shinobi: mercenary and soldier of the Fire Nation. Really, the killing method, wwhy care about it, as long as he doesn't torture them, and even that is ok for info ... Explosions are his fighting style, I find it as horrible to be killed with elemental ninjutsu or the gentle fist or even by insects who sucks your chakra. It's wasn't like if Naruto was laughing while blowing them off! And the "victims" wouldn't have hesitated to kill them, and even if they are far weaker, doesn't mean they cannot have a lucky shot or a shinobi isn't hided among them. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting story which I wouldn't mind following :) For someone who doesn't have English as their first language, it's actually not that bad! Sure, there are mistakes here and there, but they're all easily fixed You could copy paste your story into Microsoft Word and have the application run a spellcheck and grammar check. It would point out mistakes and suggest better replacements for the words/sentences :) Good luck in your writing! |
![]() ![]() Maybe I just haven't read enough of it being on ch 5, but Naruto just seems like such a fucking pussy right now. He just needs to shut kurenai up cause she thinks she knows better then naruto in a lot of situation but she doesn't, hoe |
![]() ![]() Can deidara come back in the story please |
![]() ![]() I've been wondering if there was a story like this. In that Naruto was Deidara's protégé. Definitely faving this. n_n |