cute

There's not enough Frazel out there. I also love Frank's character development. All of them, really, but Piper and Frank especially. Sweet story, the ending was great and I caught the hint from some parts of Letter in Ink. Good stuff.

I like how you added the last line about the boyfriend.

It's so sweet! Frank and Hazel would be amazing parents.

SO CUTE! I LOVED IT! This is the 5th time I read this and I still love it so much!

So sweet!

I love the ending! Great job!

Awe, so cute! :)

Great story.

That was so adorable! I lived it!

OMG THE FEELS! AH, I read this twice last night and once today. (Obsessed much? XD) This is just so freakinnt good. This is amazing. I just can't describe how much I love it.

D'AWWWWWEEEEE THAT WAS SO SWEET IT MADE MY TEETH HURT.
And it made me cry.
A lot.
It's just...I feel like Frank is already kind of sensitive about his strength, and to have his daughter be afraid of him would just tear him apart. But I love the ending you threw in there. Imagine the blessing of ares on him when her boyfriend is first left alone with him. Ahahaha...I pity the boyfriend.

JBSJKA SO FUZKONG CUTE SFH

:)

Wow...this left me both speechless and teary eyed. I'll never forget this story, it had the same affect on me as a real, published book. I'm not going to try to describe this story, no words can say how beautiful this is. It's so...beautiful, in it's own, simple, lovely, amazing way. I whish I had a loudspeaker so I could scream to everyone 'Read this story!' You have an amazing gift when it comes to writing. Thank you so much for this, you made my day...and my week :')