Reviews for And Persephone Fell
Guest chapter 3 . 12/9/2019
soo good
Cmechillin chapter 3 . 4/28/2018
I've never left a review for this, even though I've read it countless of times, my apologies. I'm truly a fan of all your Klonnie writings. I love how you capture each and every one of their moments, and you stay true to their characters.
wordsmithie chapter 3 . 11/11/2017
So here I am, finally, to review your wonderful story. (lady disdain on tumblr).
Man, just...It's brilliant how MUCH you do with so little. The writing is quite sparse almost, but there isn't a sentence or word out of place. Everything is just right and necessary.
I admire how well you weave the atmosphere of this story. The tone of it is pitch perfect, and each image is conjured up so vividly in the mind while reading.
Also, that image of Bonnie striding away from the castle as it goes up in flames behind her is powerful, honestly, I just felt so vindicated. And then being embraced by the forest. It all reads like a fairy tale. Your imagery is just SO STRONG and so effective and it's honestly a pleasure to read this fic.
aprilf00l chapter 3 . 11/3/2015
So enjoyed this story, some part reminded me of beauty and the beast, anyway - awesome!
not the bees chapter 3 . 7/23/2015
This had such an ethereal, fairy-tale like atmosphere, perfectly encapsulating the myth behind it, I loved it. It was seductive and warm, but also strange. There's a darkness here you don't shy away from and I really like that Bonnie embraced it, but made it her own as she explored her sexuality with Klaus. The premise was ingenious and the writing was very poetic and literary, so great job!
Nikkerbocker23 chapter 3 . 5/6/2015
I can't believe I haven't read this before! It was so freaking fantastic! My Klonnie feelings are all back again and, now, I have to go hunting for more fanfiction. Wonderful job with this!
Sonja chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
i loved this. you imagery is always so poetic and beautiful. 33 i really like your take on persephone and the pomegranates as well. so often i'm left frustrated but i really loved what you did with it.
negrobarc chapter 3 . 8/4/2014
Carry on please.
RieDaerien chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
I love it!
itscalledkarma chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
What a fitting ending..although I would have loved a confrontation, having them always wondering when she'll reappear, the anticipation would be pure torture! Hope you continue writing Klonnie fics because this one was extraordinary!
itscalledkarma chapter 2 . 5/31/2014
Loved this chapter so much and your a/n was so true...sadly even today it rings true. So glad Bonnie got a little vengence for her mother's callous murder!
silverscribbles chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
oooh wow! This is really good! I do like the way it flows and all :) Very nice!
The Cuteness chapter 3 . 11/26/2013
oh my god I was this story had more to it. It was so freakin good!
The Cuteness chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
This is what I'm talking about! Klonnie has become my new favorite because of stories like this!
BlackWidow10.27 chapter 3 . 11/22/2013
this is a steamy story
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