You doubt yourself to much I see very little wrong with this fic other than the occasional grammar mistake and a more or less ignoreable lore mistake other than that it's a really good fanfic

The eldar should be around 6.0 to 6.6

High Gothic is Latin Low Gothic(which is probably what your Guardsman would be speaking) would be a Latin like language but not exactly the same with differences depending on the world

This was amazing to read , i actully read it last year ...

The combat was amazingly well detailed that i could follow along nicely

But why did it had to end though ? Dont know what artifact to place in the story ? The column of guards men tired of marching along side the astartes with a single xeno in the middle ?

To me

This story was a perfect love story, the pacing wonderful.

please bring back this story

I really like this so far. Despite xeno love being foul heresy, I like how you're developing it by having them rely on each other to survive.

I usually make it a habit of pointing out every third minor error (always point out major errors of any kind), but with yours, I get what you mean. They best way to iron out those is to simply read the whole chapter aloud once. Or have the computer do it for you. Good story so far, keep it up!

hey i wanted to say great job i hope the eldar and the human pair up

That's one short Eldar, seeing as their supposed to be well tall and really slim

I was incredibly disappointed find this story come an end. I certainly hope you do well with your new story

Sorry to hear that. I liked your story as it was one of the very few good Eldar/Guard romance out there.

If you really feel that you wrote yourself in a corner and see no way out it's useless to try and force the story to progress. I'd say keep the characters and make a new story

This was a great story. I hope you'll continue writing it, but I wouldn't mind a different story. Keep the eldar x guardsmen pairing. We see so few romances with the eldar.

As much as I would like to say keep writing, for I love this story, I also know how hard it is to write something you don't fully enjoy. I would say start off with a fresh story, and take BIBOTOT's advice for the eldar, for when you train for 100 years with your brothers and sisters in the art of war, you become very loyal and tough. Make the choise that is best for you and readers will be sure to follow. Best of luck!

I'm actually a bit torn on this. In my opinion, trying to work through problems is usually the better option. At the same time though, sometimes you just need a rewrite. I don't know what you were planning on doing with the plot so I can't be sure just how big the wall you hit is. So instead, I'll just say that whatever decision you make is up to you. I'll still follow the story regardless.

Personally I'd really like it to stay a GuardxEldar story if you do a rewrite. The canon has filled my head with so many stories of Guardsmen dying in an endless meat-grinder and Eldar seeing everything they love destroyed around them that the possibility (however slim) of a happy ending for at least two of them is very appealing to me.

Either way, the choice is yours and I'll still support whatever story you pursue.