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Wait your birthdays 1st Feb? Mine is too! Unfortunately I'm like five years younger than you but yay! Keep updating please!

I like the plot so far, but I feel like the sentences are too simple. They need more punctuation and depth, and maybe put them together into paragraphs? Otherwise, it seems like it is goign to be a great story and I'm looking forward to reading more!

Happy birthday! Good fic.

HOPEFULLY NOT A FLAME! (I like to call it constructive criticism.) If you were to edit this chapter, I'd make Blunt and Jones a lot more professional. They're really OOC. For example, a seasoned agent like Mrs. Jones would know better than to call Alex by his real name-she would stick with his cover, Samuel. Also, in the books, Blunt is described as being incredibly... blunt, a grey man with no personality whatsoever. Cracking a joke is not what he would do. Blunt is known to have said that he doesn't believe in coincidences. I would think that MI6 would not act on assumptions made by the police, and would instead conduct their own investigation. Blunt knows just how good this star agent of his is, and would definitely not assume that he couldn't get out of a situation like that which supposedly killed him. Alex IS, after all, their best weapon. If I were in Blunt's place, my first action would be to determine whether or not Alex is with SCORPIA again or any other terrorist organization. (Alex does, after all, harbor some serious anger towards MI6, both for being the indirect cause of his family's death, and for blackmailing him into working for them.) Blunt definitely does not hold any sympathy for any of his agents. I wouldn't be surprised if, faced with a situation where an agent does come back from the dead, Blunt had them restrained and taken to a cell under the bank (real thing, I'm not just making this up) where they were then interrogated. One last thing (I know, I rant): from how you wrote the scene when Alex barges into the Bank, I got the impression that Jones worked reception. I seriously doubt that the Deputy Head of MI6 would be there to intercept every visitor to come through the elevator doors.
There. I'm done. Please don't take this the wrong way, and know that I thank you for your efforts in writing a story for my favorite fandom.

didn't write a story part?! i am sad but keep it up!

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Don't worry love, we'll wait. Although it will be agonising, we will...

Pls Pls pls update soon

Real Fun!
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holy wow i like this

Great chapter, please update soon :)

You need to slow it down a bit. You just put what normally would be five chapters into one. Many of your characters are OOC, specifically Wolf, the Sergant, and Mr. Blunt. In the first chapter, the way Alex got into R&G bank was a bit unrealistic. The security at MI6 headquarters would probably be a lot tougher than what you put. Alex approached as a shady figure in an obvious disguise. He would have been stopped the second he walked through the door. In your chapters, your progression of time is off. When Alex first arrived you later put that he spent three weeks with K-unit and bonded with them. Later on you switched back to saying he had only arrived that day. This was highly confusing and could easily be avoided by a quick read through before posting. Also, when K-unit was chasing Wolf and Alex, you had Eagle faint from exertion. Eagle is an SAS trained, elite soldier; he would not faint from a sprint that most high school athletes can easily complete. He is used to rigorous training. Alex also would not have chosen to live in a flat in London. He is a spy that is presumed dead, he would most likely not live in a flat so close the MI6 headquarters. He'd probably move to a different country to avoid being spotted. He would most likely have a car by then as well. When writing Alex' name, specifically in the second chapter, avoid writing Alex/Samuel, Alex/Jaguar, Samuel/Jaguar, and so on... Try to pick one name and stick with it. Try to put more detail into the movements and actions of the characters. When writing their emotions or expressions, go deeper. Avoid making all the characters share similar personality traits, they are different people, make their dialouge and reactions different as well. A trick you could use to see if you characterization is accurate is to see if you could identify who said what if you were not told who's line it was. Basically, if a reader pulled a random line of dialogue from your story, would they be able to identify who said it? Characterization is key, not all of the characters are nice or have a sense of humor. They will all react differently to various situations. And lastly, try to explain certain changes you made, such as Alex becoming an official Agent, and Fox being part of K-unit, even though he left the SAS. I really did enjoy your story, even if my long list of critiques might suggest otherwise. Try to either look back and change the errors, or use these tips for future reference. Have fun writing and good luck with your new braces!

Blackmail chapters work well with brilliant chapters, can you stop holding it ransom now?

amazing story! Plz plz plz carry on!