Yep That was a great story keep up the awesome work.

This is so sweet! Well done :)

This is one of the best fanfic about these two guys I've read. It's well written and all, and it's deep, strong and the dinamics are awesome. Good work!
J.

Great job really liked this fic :)

This would have Berna great multi-chapter story! It should have been one! It's a good story and all, and the only one I found with the two of them being a couple! But to be honest, it felt rushed.

I love how everything ties together. Everything from the wording to the slow burn is exquisite. My favorite line is, "They leave him feeling bereft of air, the warring emotions so similar to drowning." The jerking off remark also added some delightful humor to combat the angst.

I read your story. It is so unique. Nicely done. Chicago Fire is and AWESOME show.

This is well written. I like the way it is not a straight forward love story, but an ongoing process. The "jerking off in your kitchen" scene was really funny...it was priceless. I really hope you pursue this further, I would love to read more of you pieces.

I love this pairing and it overjoys me to see you write for them. This was so beautiful. I look forward to seeing more Casey and Severide from you in the future.

Admittedly, I'd prefer something M-rated for these two hotties :) but this one shot was just great!
Love all those pent up conflicted emotions. Hate is a strong feeling but love is stronger, even if it takes nearly loosing a loved one to understand what's what.
PLEASEEEE, write more C/S soon!

Oh thank you! you wrote some Casey x Severide! and it is great! I love the general feeling of longing.

yay for teamsevasey (saw that online haha) and this piece was awesome. pleas write more about this pair. I love them also and they have such pent up chemistry together!

I am kind of in love with this ship and it makes me really happy to see something like this done on here. I'm sad there was nothing explicit as far as their love affair is concerned, but I'm more than happy to let my imagination do the rest. Great work. x