| Reviews for Poison Ivy and Harley Quinn 1- Part 1: Intruder In The Night |
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  Scarlet Coach chapter 4 . 7/26 please please continue this story |
 Jane5hadow chapter 8 . 4/27 You still writing this at all? |
| Scarlet Coach s0 chapter 8 . 3/28 please continue the story |
| Maria chapter 6 . 3/9 Nah, Batman's good. He's the 'good guy' anyway so this is fine. |
| Maria chapter 2 . 3/9 This is pretty cool so far, but I think there are some unnecessary details that you could leave out. Other than that it's good! |
| A lebian chapter 4 . 9/27/2018 Hi love, some constructive criticism here... I like how you write but that is just not how lesbian sex work. Also if someone is a virgin you slowly add finger. If you use 4 roughly like that you will end up hurting the person you are with. And let someone with experience proofread your stuff, plus it can get out of hand when you actually imagine who is where and how it physicaly works. P.S. it's called fingering if you do it to someone else, masturbation is on one's self. ;) Anyway keep it up, kiddo. You are doing great. I really enjoyed the previous chapters. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/1/2018 This is awesome! Pls update! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/18/2018 Liked the story |
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/4/2017 I am still confused...i am a confused person...lol... |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/4/2017 I am confused is Harley dead or no? |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/3/2017 good |
| dandrecollier622 chapter 8 . 6/8/2017 I enjoyed the story, I hope you'll come back to it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2017 Is part 2 out yet!? |
| Liv chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 To: Creator (Harley Quinn & Poison Ivy it was great very detailed and understanding, creator, whoever you are, you are amazing at writing you should definitely be proud of your self! - Liv Macnaughtan 3 |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/4/2017 is there no part 2 then or is it a different story |
