Thank you, thank you, thank you.
I've cried buckets while reading this story, but what a lovely and guy wrenching story.
Keep up the great work.

Oh wow this isnone of the best stories I've read on here. I even stayed up until 3:30am to finish it haha.

Well done, loved it!

Oh wow just reading this for the first time..

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What a fantastic story, you are a great writer thankyou for sharing.

"talking would of helped" "Wouldn't his daughter of wanted it?"

Good grief! It's "talking WOULD'VE helped" and "Wouldn't his daughter HAVE wanted it?"

OF isn't a verb! It sounds like 'VE or HAVE, I suppose, but honestly!

Do you really not know the difference between BREATHE and BREATH? And it's LAPSE not LAPS. (There also are far too many other errors to mention.)

I disagree with hristian that Jess is totally blameless. She was seeing a married man, Having lunches with him. Even though she was supposedly honing her craft she enjoyed living the nice life with Christian. Nice lunches there was no excuse for her kissing him. She should have said go home to your wife Christian, this is too dangerous agame you’re playing and I can’t be a part of it. No she is not blameless. Especially now that she is living there, she wants a relationship. I never trusted her motives.

I found this story by accident. It is one of the most talened, heart provoking, real reads I have come across. Thank you for the tears, smiles and LOVE you have written.

So sad but all on Christian, beautifully done.

I'm seeing a set up. is Elena involved?

I don’t care how innocent Chrtian tries to tell himself this ‘substitute Ana’ is I’m stilled that he doesn’t think he’s doing anything wrong, he doesn’t think he’s cheating. He’s taken thoughts, feelings and actions which should only belong to Anaand thrown them away by giving them to Jess.

I want to feel sorry for him missing Ana but as always he’sa Spoiled adolescent. He won’t go home cause she’s not there so he spends more time with Jess. Boo boo, he deserves to have A a leave him. If this isnt cheating just because he doesn’t fuck her he really has no idea what intimacy and fidelity are.

What a well crafted story, I really feel for both main characters, for their despair. I think you imply that Jessis a little less innocent in all of this. She says she feels like her performance is well received when Christian loses himself but I really think she want something from him, if only physically. And not just a day on the boat or a nice dinner. She’s whoring herself out. Is that what acting is? She doesn’t see the difference between a ticking and taking things too far. She died her hair with Allan to get Christian for some sort of relationship.

wow great story i really enjoyed it thank you

This has been the most amazing story about Anna and Christian I have ever read. I have read many stories of Fanfiction but, this one OMG is all I can say. I had to stop reading today it was so emotional and touching thank you for allowing Ana and Christian to be a couple again, It just proves that the kind of Love they shared Never Ever Dies,,,,,,,,

I have read hundreds of fifty shades fan fiction stories... but I will say with 100% certainty that THIS STORY is my ultimate number 1 favourite that I have ever read... I have come back to read this a second time through and it doesn’t disappoint... it’s captivating, heartbreaking and throughly met all of my expectations... kudos to the author is this story... truly beautifully written and I salute you! 3