interesting...next

really you have other familys and people help her sounds boreing and same as other fanfics she should get strong on her own

I am looking forward to chapter 2 and I hope Naruko meets Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze the legendary summoner.

Next chapter please! :)

Hello from a year in the future... (Shakes author) come back already!

Read disclaimer love it already

Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)

More please. This is very interesting and unusual.

Can't tell you how happy I am to see you update. Have to admit, this took a step in a direction that was unforeseen, and refreshingly original. Was not expecting her form of dress as I thought you were basing it on the story pic. Would you mind explaining the top though? At present, I just picture something akin to a tube top with the sleeves of some mages/holy people. Thank you for listening to my request of the Shakujo, my inner fan boy whooped when I saw it.

Have to say that what I can derive of her personality, although it is based mostly on conjecture at this point, you depict a very believable one for a Naru who received the proper care. From what I can tell she is stubborn, but can set that aside when it matters for those she cares for as shown in the flash back when she is asking for help. Kind, intelligent in a way that gives a reason and comparable to Naruto's way of using things in different ways. Informal and possibly brash and mischievous if her addressal of Bahamut is anything to go by, at least with those she likes. Again, this is based mostly on conjecture, but as someone who's hobby is studying people, can't wait to see how much I got right or failed at.

I'm not gonna lie, I laughed when the portal went wrong and anarchy came to visit.

so...what universe did she just land in?

I so forgot about this story, but it is a pretty good storey so far so please continue as is.

umm... do you mean Ivalice, where the FFXII game takes place?

fine if she's not with itachi can she be with shikamaru or neji. anyway great chapter

Boy it has been some time since I've read this fic, it's nice to see an update. I hope to see the state of those in Konoha especially Naruko's family.

cool update and who's naru gonna get paired with? as maybe you should give her 1 guy and 1 girl that way she'll have a family later but also might be able to pass down her mana using ability to her children