Reviews for Payback |
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Palladion.x chapter 1 . 3/28/2014 That was so lovely to read! I personally really enjoy reading little lighthearted stories like this. It has really put a smile on my face so thank you :) |
Icee Suicune chapter 1 . 1/30/2014 Super cute! Your style was fun to read too :) |
kopycat101 chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Aw, this is so cute and sweet! |
Alli-dunno chapter 1 . 12/26/2013 D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. I loved this. I love the fluffy friendship of the P4 gang and I especially that the relationship between Yosuke and Chie is cute. 3 Love it. |
MathAtMidnight chapter 1 . 10/23/2013 And there is nothing wrong with a light-hearted scene such as this. As for the plot, it seems right, given what I know of P4G, but I suppose I wouldn't be able to comment on the characters from the Arena side of the plot. Still, it worked out very well-your style is still as good as ever, and it feels like an event just plucked straight out of a daily event, so bravo on that. I look forward to seeing more. Cheers! |
l3largus chapter 1 . 10/23/2013 This is just filled with good feels that I wont be surprised if keep smiling well into the afternoon. |
Fan chapter 1 . 10/23/2013 That was really good! I love stories like that |
EmD23 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013 I have to say I actually chuckled at the fact Rise's name isn't mentioned on the tag. I'm sure you just forgot to put it there, it's just that the thought of Mitsuru and Akihiko putting money down for it while Rise didn't makes me laugh. It truly is a lovely piece, though. I personally adored it. |