Good chapters (the ones were Zer0 is injected with the mind thingy.) But I feel as if some parts of the story is poorly executed. Awesome concept, bad execution.

Hey there. I love this story, very cool. I love Zaige, and Maya/Krieg :D
Just one correction to this chapter, at the end: Gaige is saying that attacking during the day is a good plan, and Zero is supporting her, but his Haiku says "attacking at night is smart". Shouldn't it be something like "Daytime attack would be smart" or something like that?
Just wanted to mention that, it's caught my attention a couple of times, but I kept forgetting to mention it.

Otherwise, this story is great :)
All the best
Adam

AAAAAWWWWWW! So cute! (;

T-T even though Zer0 isn't my fav character in borderlands, I'm still very sad. Why did the new-u stations have to be out?!

Oh SH*T!

Wow, had just figured it out like that, surprising considering he's…Kraig. And there's the powers, so that takes care of that.

Yay, he's alive, but using him against Gaige, how will Hyperion do that?

T-T

If I were on Pandora for even a month, I would hate going without a shower for that long. I bet it felt nice after so long. Strangely, that's exactly what I do, I summon DT just for the company more than anything.

I always thought Zer0 had a hard time always speaking in haikus, but this puts a simple explanation to it, but knowing, automatically, that that sentence had 29 syllables is very impressive. Just realized thought, there hasn't been very much in the way of upgrades, like DT or Phaselock, or Anarchy and the like, which makes me sad. ANARCHY! :)

Gaige isn't alone on pandora, no matter what, she'll always have her friends, her family, by her side. -

She's not wrong, Claptrap can be REALLY annoying. But at least he can put them on the road to sanctuary.

This promises to be an exciting story, but I wish they had remade the intro with Gaige in it, but Gearbox didn't, so…it makes me sad. Maybe one day they'll remake it with her and Kraig having an ACTUAL intro card! But back on point, this story puts a fun twist on how Gaige survives pandora and I can't wait to read the rest!

argh awesome stroy! cant wait for part two!

You're an incredibly good writer, I can't wait to see part two! Keep up the good work!