You're really good at this horror/plot twist stuff. Damn.

OH MY GOD! At the end I was super confused then it all clicked together! They both died and Dave was reliving the day! I just then silently screamed at 4 in the morning.

OMG This is so amazing! I loved the story To be honest, this is the best thought out story I've read in a long time. I hope you keep up the amazing work

Holy shit.
Holy motherfucking shit.
HOLY MOTHERFUCKING FLIPPING SHIT!

I fuckking swear this fic made me shit my fucking pants, broke my heart, and FUCKING FLIPPED MY BRAIN!

But to be all honest, after all the shit about Dave's deja vus and John's explanation of being residual, I just sorta fucking got it at that point.

The only problem is, I KEPT READING IT TIL THE VERY LAST PART OF THAT VERY LAST SENTENCE! And now, here I am, in the corner, gross sobbing myself to sleep.

This fic fucking flipped my shit and I love you for that. Thank you for making my day more awesome because of your writing. I need more fics like this and I need more writers like you.

Lots of love for this fic and you!

Holy shit... I want to cry. I didn't get Dave's deja vu at first but... Gah! That was amazing! You are a wonderful writer. Please don't ever stop making stories. XD

Oh, you're such a bitch... good story though...

S&K

That was excellent well done

OH MY GOD I SCREAMED I WAS NOT EXPeCTING THAT

Please excuse me while I kill a few children in anguish over this story. XD Great job though, I love your writings.

How 2 fuck people up:
Them a link 2 this.

I KNEW IT
dammit

HOLY SHIT THAT ENDING!

"There's a lot of speculation," John says, pointing the camera up to look at some cobwebs he found interesting. "Some people say they're reliving how they died, and some people believe they're actually reliving the entire day over and over, ending the same way every time. Spirits are on a different dimensional plane than us, so I guess time wouldn't work the same. It's sad, like you said."
Rereading this paragraph after I read the whole story made me think. It made me think that you are an amazing writer. John and Dave are added to the ghosts among the house. They are reliving their deaths. Just like John said.
As I said before, you are an amazing writer.

O-O
I...
words.
I can't.
words.
I don't can't words.
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OMFG.
OMFG.
OMFG.
FEELINGS.
JAM.
FEELJAM
ALL OF IT.
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As soon as Rose mentioned the residual haunting and Dave said he had a "bad feeling" I KNEW IT! I KNEW BUT I KEPT READING GOSH FRIGGING DARNIT.