Aw this is amazing! You are a talented writer.

This is truly beautiful

I loved it. It was beautiful.

:-)

Oh my this is beautiful writing. The story of Hook's loneliness and loss is moving. He had no hope, no dreams, was willing to believe the bad. I thought he had died with Pan. Then there was Emma. Holding Bae's hand. Wonderful.

I just love how manage to write these characters so vividly, they're feel so real, so alive when you read your work. You should be on the writing staff on OUAT :)

Well that was...AMAZING. WOW. I almost have no words for the magical way in which you wove this. It was truly a wonder to read. Kudos!

sooo good

i'm sobbing omg this was so good. beautiful, beautiful prose and plot. kudos!

This was great!

Greatly enjoyed it. The only negative I have to comment on is Baelfire is spelled wrong. Otherwise, excellent story. :)
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i haven't cried so much while reading a fic in forever, wonderfully written!