| Reviews for Finally |
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   catspats31 chapter 1 . 3/14/2019 While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines: "Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference." Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as AdultFanfiction. |
| Gamera68 chapter 8 . 7/24/2015 Sorry to hear all of this and I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors. |
| Shark Byte chapter 2 . 5/27/2015 "Sacrificed"? Holy cow, THAT was a rather ghoulish surprise |
| Skyler chapter 6 . 5/17/2015 It was a really nice story! You had some writing errors but still pretty good! Ive never watched chobits I read the manga 3 |
| Ellie Eugson chapter 6 . 4/27/2015 I'm slightly dissapointed. Though you thought of yourself as a "crappy writer" you are unable to acknowledge the fact that other people liked your work. I was one who waited eagerly for your next chapter since chapter one! I-myself, do not see you as a bad writer. If you think that you are not food at writing, then maybe you are bad a chapters. You are flawless when it comes to lemons. I would like to see what you come up with if you ever try one-shot writing. Please conticnue! |
| Eureka234 chapter 1 . 11/27/2014 Awesome story I'm so glad someone finally wrote this. Hideki makes me laugh. You got the characters spot on. |
| Iloveanimex chapter 3 . 9/20/2014 My brain doesn't know what to think any more... I'm going to sleep on it xD Goodnight SatansMistress22-Chan! And I truly hope you make it as a writer XD And when you are super famous, be sure to send me two sighed copies of all your books xD One for me and one to sell for a lot of money! And Fanfiction is an escape, I agree. I am glad there are fun, awesome people like you to talk to... goodnight Xxx |
| Iloveanimex chapter 2 . 9/20/2014 WHAT! WHAT! WHAT! (My actual words I said, as i read it) What! SACRIFICED! WHAT DA ACTUAL FK! LOL! THIS IS SO MESSED UP! BUT I LOVE IT! Does that mean I'm messed up?! Well this was to be expected... normal people wouldn't read this, because they are boring! YOU ARE AWESOME! **BOWS DOWN** You are now my Fanfic God! LIVE LONG AND STAY EPIC! |
| Iloveanimex chapter 1 . 9/20/2014 Oh holy crap! What did I just read! This is hysterical! Love it! You are a genius! |
| tk-mr chapter 6 . 8/19/2014 No wtf? How could you stop this fic? Keep it going! More, write more! |
| Gamera68 chapter 4 . 7/2/2014 That plot twist! Nice update and please try to update again :) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2014 what will happen next? be tuned. :) |
| battledragon chapter 4 . 4/30/2014 good story i was wondering if your going to contuine it... You really should. :-) |
| Gieco chapter 4 . 4/30/2014 Dang it's good and intense I really want to know what happens next if he divorces chi and leaves her with a kid, Kae's dead sisters kid to be exact or if he keeps on how he is and if it eventually turns into a threesome relationship, or what ever else theirs so many possibilities it kept me reading intently. |
| Gamera68 chapter 3 . 4/16/2014 Wow... who knew her mother was a murderer? |
