I like the title for this chapter c: I think this one brought out Bruce's character a lot :)

I've never seen this type of chapters before. Writing a letter in a line is new to me. I think the emphasis on the words was great. Nice chapter :) Wonder how I missed this story.

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Um, great, but...
1. Every time you need to say you're,you put your.
2. You changed the page format from center to left in the middle of this chapter.
But otherwise, i love it! This unique style of free verse really helps, and your writing style is stellar. Could you do one for loki or nick fury?

Interesting. It was...interesting to read.

Hi pal, that was a pretty nice poem. Keep it up

Deep. But how are you going to do Thor? And Bruce?

nice analysis of clint in this poem. like how you made it very long, in a literal sense.

nice analysis of natasha in this poem.

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Deep... Deep deep poetry. Deep and beautiful, but also...sad. Sorry if this is weird but just finished watching The Last Song. I'm really pathetic for crying again.

Really depressing but in a good way (please don't kill me)

ohgosh, i read too much angst 'cause this was basically fluff for me (:
but this was seriously stunning
typical me, reviewing out of any known fandom of mine, but i still loved this and really got a feel of who tony is.
just a broken guy hiding like he thinks he's a superhero
i also loved how it wasn't totally over-formatted, free-verses like those drive me nuts
imma basically be away for all of november shabbosim, so we need to figure out a way to get together after, kay?
nina xx

i like the idea of doing both an acrostic and an actual poem.

At was quite depressing if you ask me but you didn't really so I say again that was depression but continue this story your a good writer.