So Harry read the version in OUAT and still wants to go to Neverland? Well I guess being stuck with an asshole like Pan is better than the life he would lead

"Mrs Figgs" should be "Mrs. Figgs".

You switch tenses a couple times like here: "which is nothing new..."

This is an interesting idea. I've never seen it before and even if you'd chosen the traditional Neverland to spirit Harry off to, I think it would still be quite interesting.

I'm very interested in how his time there goes - given that he's a wizard and what's going to happen to him there and if he's ever going to regret going to Neverland like the other Lost Boys.

Up date sooooon!

:D Any place is better than Hogwarts or his place. I love these kinds of fics.

sounds good but this seems a bit like a prologue rather than a whole story

now this is interesting! can't wait for more!

even though that was only one chapter that was nice could you perhaps update the story.

Lovely!

interesting story

cool love please continue

liked it!

Love it!

Keep going!

Poor, Harry. I was really feeling for him in this story.

What time was it in the fic? I don't doubt that even Muggles wouldn't notice a boy flying through the sky.

Your English has definitely improved since the last time I read one of your fics XD There are still syntax errors, and some incorrect grammar and vocabulary usage, but I can see the improvement. :D

So, was Harry not allowed to go to sleep for the entirety of his punishnent? Vernon is /pretty/ stupid. XD

Oh, this is interesting. I find it more than a bit heartbreaking that Harry tried acting like Dudley to make the Dursleys love him-it makes perfect childish sense, and yet...having him stay with Mrs. Figg for a month is also an interesting choice of the Dursleys, but one that I think works pretty well. While I've never watched Once Upon a Time, I think the cross-over is working well. Definitely interesting for Harry to end up with that book, and I like how he has no fear about being dragged out the window and all...although it's again heartbreaking that he's perfectly fine with this, or anything, if it means not being with the Dursleys anymore.

Thats wonderful :) keep writing