The Potters did go under the charm in 1980, but they didn't die until Halloween of 1981, while you said they died in 1980, maybe that's what people were saying, not that you got the date of them hiding under the Fidelius wrong, but rather their death date? Harry was one when they were killed, so that would be 1981, and the dates on their graves say 1981. Otherwise, I think this is a great story, though I wasn't suspecting Regulus to show up. I suppose I should have because he's one of the characters listed in the summary thing, and don't get me wrong, I'm glad he did, because I love Regulus, but when you were calling him Polaris, I figured that Regulus was still dead in this story and it was another family member to help Sirius, and Sirius merely learned Regulus's story, which was why he was a main character! I'm so glad he is alive, though! And I like your character, Sarah. She's really fun and can definitely keep the Black boys in line ;), plus she's a muggle, which I think is great, because it shows that Regulus didn't believe in the pureblood mania stuff, not because he tolerated muggles and wanted to go against his family, but because he just didn't care enough to be able to fall in love with one, and I think that's really sweet!

Hmm, interesting. I wonder how this goes.

Really, really, really great story! I so love it! :D
I can't wait for the next chapter! It's just such a great story! :)
keep up the great work! ;)

Oh I'm loving the story, I hope that you'll be able to update soon as I would love to see what you have planned next for the story. I hope Remus sees sense soon...

Once again the Wizardling Britain demonstrated their hypocrisy. How hard it to force a vial of Veritaserum down Malfoy's throat and find out if he really was Imperiused? I mean, nobody from the 'Light' families believed the 'Imperius' excuse, but instead of using the opportunity to send the true Death Eaters to Azbakan, they cry over the foreign involvement.
P.S. I wonder why Sirius never mentioned that Dursleys were abusive in his letter. I mean, Remus should have known what kind of woman Petunia was from Lily. Knowing about abuse, he could understand Sirius' actions better.

Hi,

You've written a very interesting story, the concept is lovely. There are however a few things that need attention. I'm not trying to be critical in a bad way, I'd simply like to see you improve on a story that has great promise.

Overall I'd suggest a Beta. There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but those can be handled easily. It would also be good if you had someone to help you check facts, dates, general information, etc.

Your characterization is not bad, but sometimes you tend to use words that aren't really canon based and don't relate to the characters very well. Things such as "cub" or "Siri".

As stated, these are just my observations and I mean no offense with them.

Be Blessed

Jaideum

Blasted hypocrites. They believe Malfoy but not Sirius? Why I oughta...

i hope you continue this soon..i'm really interested in seeing where this goes.

yeah! they got him out, jahoo! I once read another fic where Remus used something similar to get custody over Sirius daughter (OC) and later Harry too. Long live the americans, or something :)

Typos:
Patients Patiency
Vesiterserum Veritaserum

Typos:
Grimwauld Grimmauld
hiarchy hierarchy
Godric's Hallow Hollow

Typos:
aparate apparate
London Harold London Herald

Is this story before or after 1994? Because the Channel Tunnel started to operate to general public in 6 May 1994.

It gets really simple minded here with paper thin characterization.

I like the chapter