I'm heading onto the second story! Loving your scenario!

You have me on the edge of my seat!

Oh no! I should have realized that things were going too well!

I've said this before, I'll say it again. I love this story!

Good chapter! Will be reading onward.

Love how you're writing Khan!

Oooh! I loved reading the Inferno. It's the only one in that group that I've actually read, but I recognize all of the titles.

Loving the story, will be reading onward!

Khan is already turning on the charm. Not too surprising! Whether Khan is played by Ricardo Montalban or Benedict Cumberbatch, he oozes charisma.

I can hear BC's voice saying these lines. I was quite pleased to find a story involving Marla McGivers. You've seen Space Seed!

This was bloody brilliant! Granted it was short, but it was absolutely enthralling and I can't wait to read more!

Everything about this story is sheer perfection! I should be doing laundry and other chores but I'm definitely starting on your next story in the series instead! :D

wow love it

I found this story through a round about way-I read a Sherlock BBC review that you had written, then went to your page. I haven't read any Kahn stories, but after reading your writing maxims, I thought I'd give it a go. I am very glad I did. This story is excellent. I understand why Kahn is acting the way he does-yes, he can be violent and hot tempered but he's more than just the Bad guy here. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.

Cool, nice to see a really interesting take on the preamble to the beginning to into darkness!

Thanks

wow...if I had not come late to this story, I fear i would be smashing my laptop now. Wonderful tale.