Beautifully written and wish they had more moments like these on the show. And pretty damn good for never watching an episode!

Great story, particularly in light of the fact that you'd never watched an episode.

'Monsters are not born' - really enjoyed this line. It fits well with the whole concept of the story and the series as well. I've turned into a bit of a Haylijah fan and it's really great to see so many stories revolving around them. You really captured the feeling of their relationship and especially the ending is great food for thought (I'll bet that conflict will be adressed sometime in the show). Thanks for sharing!

This was beautifully written. I love how you captured the confusion of H/E relationship as they grow to know one another. Lovely characterisations of my two favourite characters.

this is an amaziong story and you could fool me that you didn't see the Originals, because you wrote it well. At the end I noticed the changes, but thoight they were deliberate:P

This made me smile really it's amazing hope u keep writing this fic!️

Awww... That was so sweet and cute. Now if only that could be a possibility in the show! Elijah would be a good father.

Love if! Please write more! ASAP

This was absolutely beautiful, I can't even begin to describe. :)

I really like this keep it up!

This was a great read. Well done!

Loved it! Hope you write more!

I really loved this story! I adore them as a couple and I too like imagining Elijah as the baby's father. I hope they get together on the show soon!

Love it!

I really enjoyed this. Hopefully something like this happens on the show. Hayley and Elijah have so much chemistry. Great job writing. I love how you broke the story into parts.