This is great.

It's very good! I really enjoy it ! It was a real pleasure reading you, and don't worry, your story WAS excellent, I just love the way you write it !

Sweet little story, just right for a bit of afternoon reading!

I loved it, I just want this kiss to grow and get hot and intense and visceral. I wonder if it will be a chapter 2.
But "Shadow Child" is my favorite I read it everday until you post chapter 16, I'm in love with that fic.

This rocks! :-)

Amazing! I loved this so much and really enjoyed reading it! :)

Wonderful story! I thoroughly
Enjoyed up the great job.

Nice :)

Awwwwww, I love it! And I liked the way you wrote their kiss. Damn sherlock, planning the kiss. :p well done!

Love that show and love this too. Vpoices perfect and very sexy... :D

Nice . . . really, really nice . . . and I for one wouldn't mind at all a sequel!

that is beautiful! I absolutely adore it!

It didn't suck at all! This was such a well written and touching story. I think I actaully cried a little at the ending. This is perfect. I hope to rear more by you soon!