Wow

Great story! I love your Miral, she is so cute and a lot like her mother. I love the friendship between B'Elanna and Chakotay. And most of all I love how you write the relationship between KJ and C - it's just wonderful!
Thank you so much!

Oh thank God! At first I thought she'd died, then that she'd left him forever and now I can breathe

Awww I loved this! How sweet!

Delightful. I laughed out loud at Miral.

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

Primeiro fiquei triste, depois fiquei emocionada, depois feliz,
muito doce!

Awww lovely

Awww loved it

I enjoyed this story tremendously. I was laughing out loud about Chakotay's self assessment: paunch, jowls, etc. Heck, we'll all get old. Good job!

Very nice! Thanks for sharing it.

Adorable! For a moment I was afraid something had happened to her. But the happy ending was perfect!

I still have a ways to go until 60, but I sure hope that I'll still be as much in love as these two are when I get there. :-)

And also... I really, REALLY want to know the details about that 50th birthday! lol

Exactly as intended by you, I read the beginning rather melancholy. She was dead, how sad.

After a while it was clear she was alive, but away. Sigh ... catastrophic end of a relationship?

Well, when B Lanna and Miral then took the matter in hand, I began to hope again.

In joyfull expectation, I went with them to the restaurant, enjoyed Chakotay's unsuspectingness and laughed heartily at the final joke.

Thank you for this little treat!

Greetings from the Bavarian Forest!
Auriane

PS: has taken the opportunity to read your work on my Kindle more often. I have an older Kindle, so that no Internet ...

I have a chance to beg you a text file from?

Perfect! You conjured up a sloppy, slightly disheveled looking Chakotay who lets himself go and I could see him clearly in front of my eyes. My heart felt out to him when he was so lost without Kathryn and I grinned at Miral treating him so irreverently, loved B'Elanna's attempts at cheering him up, welled up during her talk to him and when everybody was at the restaurant. And even though I had an inkling that Kathryn would show up there too, it nevertheless was a relief when she did. :D That's how good you are! Loved it!