Hello! Nice meeting you :)
I see it's been a while since you wrote this, and here i am, 7 years later :D . Guess who stayed late at night reading till chap 19? me! haha
I've enjoyed the ride so far.. and boy! This plan - they are about to go into the road with a bunch of ppl - is giving me chills! This could be so wrong in so many ways! are you going to kill ppl? could you please not kill Tobias?
I mean... i know it's written already.. but a girl can dream ;).
Thanks a lot for your work, and thanks a lot for distracting us

I love this final

Absolutely love this story! Such a well thoughtout plot with fantastic execution. Thank you for writing this alternative ending. It is now the only ending I'll accept!

This story is absolutely fabulous and the amount of thought that’s gone into this is incredible and it’s better than the entire divergent trilogy put together. The only thing I wish is that you included the bits inveteeen becoming determinant and this story

Wow... what an absolutely amazing story! I loved every single second reading this. If you make any other divergent fanfics I would love to read them. I have read a lot of books and a lot of fanfics over the years and I must admit this is by far one of my favourites! Thank you so much for all the time and effort you’ve put into creating this amazing story!

The entirety of this story really moved me - this was the perfect end to an incredible series that had a less than satisfying ending. This had a real impact on me, so thank you for all this hard work - you're a natural author! Xxxx

I really enjoyed this alternative 3rd book in the Divergent series. The author ensures to keep the characters true to themselves with some revelations into some of the characters as well, especially Marcus. I couldn't put it down once I got half way through and will be reading it again soon.

I recently reread the Divergent trilogy and found myself reliving my heartbreak and dissatisfaction with the way Allegiant ended. I went looking online to find others who felt as cheated as I did and found recommendations for what I can only describe as your masterpiece. I laughed, cried and binge read this entire story in one go. As far as I am concerned, this is the official third book in the trilogy and our heroes FINALLY got the happiness they deserved. I cannot praise this story enough. The plot is fantastic and makes much more sense! You stayed true to the characters and fleshed out the supporting cast perfectly. You made me feel empathy for Peter, which I never thought possible. You acknowledged that Evelyn and Four needed support in recovering from domestic violence and the realities of this. You handled everything in a sensitive manner. Please keep writing and I will keep reading. Thank you for giving Tris and Four the ending they deserved.

I really loved your story. You’re a great writer. If you ever have the time, I’d love to know how Tobias proposed to Tris or how their wedding was or what it was like to find out she was pregnant.

beautiful story and amazingly written. credit to the author for such skill and determination to not only finish such a large story, but to make every aspect of it interesting - they really appreciate the quality of the story. thankyou to the author and others who helped to create this.

This book is amazing! It’s so much better than Allegiant. I read the original trilogy, and was left with so many loose ends from the third book. I actually had to double check to make sure Roth was the author of that one. I obsessively searched for some kind of explanation, and came across the recommendation to read Determinant. I’m so glad I did. This book makes more sense than the original third, and won’t leave you feeling absolutely depressed. I can’t say enough about this book or the author.

I am in awe of this story and the way it has been structured. I am tempted to completely scrap out Allegiant and it's ending from my head which is quite plausible because really I HATED and ABHORRED that ending. It was far more than pathetic and undeserved. I honestly didn't understand the point of killing Tris and leaving Tobias in THAT state when so much more could be done. So glad to find something that not only validates that view but builds upon it in an exceptional way.
Thankyou so much for your labor and for writing this.
Much love.

This was an AMAZING story! I enjoyed this so much! Please continue to write with the fabulous talent you have! Thanks again for the awesome story!

I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW I AM ENJOYING READING THIS AGAIN. I LOST IT FOR ABOUT 3YRS COULDN'T REMEMBER THE NAMES OF THE TWO BOOKS. WITH GOD'S HELP I REMEMBERED AND GOT IT AGAIN. I LOVE IT WINDCHIMED. THESE BOOKS MAKE YOU LAUGH WITH URIAH'S ANTICS AND CRY LATER IN THE BOOK FOR THE JOYFULL ENDING! I LOVE THIS I WISH I COULD GET IT IN BOOK (HARDBACK OR PAPERBACK OR ON KINDLE) FORM.

THANK YOU AGAIN!
JESSICA BERGER
PS I'VE ONLY READ THESE 5 TIMES :)

I really loved this. You are a very talented writer! I finished Allegiant a few days ago and was very upset. I saw a review on Amazon that recommended your story and after reading it, I am at peace again. Thank You.