This was amazing! I love the idea of Killian having magic and yet refusing to use it. Beautiful writing.

Lovely. Interesting and different, there are very few stories where Killian has magic. I like the way you express his disgust with his own magic. I like the resolution to Neal too. This was very good.

Brilliant- such emotion

Lovely fic! I really enjoyed it! :)

Excellent idea. I liked this one.

I really liked the quiet intimacy and acceptance in this story, with Emma touching Killian's stump, viewing the amputation without distress or disgust, and showing how much she cares for him just the same. I loved the idea of Killian having untapped magic but being resistant to it becaus of all the pain he has seen it caused. I also really enjoyed the side character bits from Regina and David in this. Great job all around; I'm really glad I got the chance to read this! :)

I love this-it's so intimate without being lustful.

I love it

This was amazing! Does hook really need magic to pull the heart out of aurora though? I've never thought about that.

Perfect! This was just beyond words

This fic may actually be my favorite Neverland CS fic. Period. The sensitivity to Killian's feelings about his missing limb and everything that goes with that was brilliantly executed. And Killian having magic? A thing I didn't realize I needed until I read this. You set up that plot device wonderfully without making it too cliche or having it overpower the intimacy and trust that were the focus. Really really great writing here. And Charming in the background? Priceless. :D

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Nina (off to share with tumblr)

loved your story

Okay, I first read this story on my phone...which now made me go log in on my computer JUST to tell you how much I love this. I don't usually review..I know its' good encouragement for writers but my cell sucks at log-in with this site. This one-shot was so beautiful written that I HAD to make a comment. Good job in catching all the characters so perfectly and having a good flow from one point to the next...I REALLY like the twist on Hook having magic. Something I haven't seen before...okay let me stop before I gush more than a Yellowstone geyser

breathtakingly beautiful!

This is such a beautiful idea and so amazingly well executed. I could feel the passion and intimacy of those moments I mile off :P
So nice to find such an original piece. I liked how you dealt with all the characters and that you didn't make Neal into a baddie, which tends to happen a lot with this ship :P
GOOD JOB