i don't think you honestly understand the point of First Person Narrative. FPN Is so that the conversation can be shown through their eyes, complete with their personal thoughts and observations of their surroundings, and others reactions.

What you wrote was still 3rd person. You just removed the parts where you explain whose talking, and others reactions to it.

Hi, I just re-read this story for the umpteenth time, and I am wondering if there is going to be a part 2 of this story. I do hope so. Thanks!

Love this story! Hope we get to see a part two some day!

I really liked this story! It‘s a great read!I just hope, there will be a sequel! :D

This *could* be a great story if and (only if) you get someone to edit it for you. There are loads of redundant sentances, misspellings, grammar mistakes, etc.
I like the idea! But the way the story is written gets in the way of the reader enjoying the story.
Please find a "beta" or an editor!36143

This story is great and I can not wait for second part which hopefully shall be published soon

Love the way he says "the errors of the previous headmaster" . Nice subtle nod to him not being there. Good going, mate.

I looked for part 2 on your profile and never found it... have you started it yet and I just missed it, or did you never get around to it? Curious because I really liked this story.

Any updates on a sequel to this?

I love it
Thanks

Excellent story. You gave me Dumbledore that I wish he would be. Please give us the 2nd part soon.

Wulfric is really too senile

Nice job!7 If only things had gone this way.

I loved this story! Waiting for the continuation, excellent work! I loved it!

Any chance of a part 2?