Great build up of tension, keeping us on the same cliffhanger for 3 chapters! Poor John. :-(

Wow! Loved the suspense of this story. I like how you did each characters pov to build it up even more. Great writing skills!

One of my all time favs! Truly your writing is a treat and the whumpage icing on the perfect read. Look forward to another. Thank you.

Loved this amazung story

Loved the story and the focus on Lionel! :)

Wonderful story in every way. I really enjoyed it and thank you so much for writing and sharing with us.

Aaaah, I want at least ten chapters more of this!

But really, I truly love this story, all the tiny references to Season 1 and when Reese and Fusco met, Finch skepticism... Just perfect.

Also, you must know I'm feeling quite proud of my special mention in chapter one *_*

I'm so gonna never stop harassing you! As soon as I'll have a real life again, that is.

Thanks thanks thanks for sharing and sorry for this horrible delay!

I'm gonna say it again: I love Fusco and I'm impressed as well 3

And again, such a great work, I just can't believe you wouldn't post this! Their banter is PERFECT!

It's like watching an episode: an angsty, marvelous, awesomely whumped episode.

"Seriously? He literally just left."

Oh, Fusco, we love you so much. And I've just watched last week episode (about time!) and he was great and they'd better keep him that way.

So yeah, short but really good *_*

Oh, girl. I feel so lucky I'm able to read the following chapter right away.

But I must tell you, this chapter is superb, because you went from domestic to bloody and it was so well written, so well put that's just perfect.

And John "looking at" Harold... I'm savoring this moment because I know the next part will be great *_*

Loved this, so Reese and Fusco, and Finch. Thanks.

Again, thank YOU, Wuchel, for writing such a story. Satisfying until the end. (I go as well for the epilogue as elaine0510!) One up for Fusco!

Omg this was really cute! Great job

Yes! Fusco to the rescue!
"Oh, I just saved your ass", Finch heard Fusco say, clearly annoyed. "Quit whining."
Love that character and this was so spot on.
Great story...thanks for sharing!

There aren't enough stories where Fusco has a starring role. Thanks for making him the hero to the heroes. Now I'll go back and read some of your previous stories like I do every time after you finish a new story.
Maybe your fans can talk you into an epilogue chapter for this story. Hint. Hint.