Reviews for If Your Heart Wears Thin
DemiHunter1234 chapter 1 . 5/21/2017
Omg! One of the best character developments I've ever read for Jasico. I. AM. IN. LOVE! Please update as soon as u can
Wrath of Nyx chapter 12 . 10/20/2015
I LOVE this story. Now I'm just imagining Percy going, "Aw, hell no!"
lillylee519 chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
I know it's been forever but I really wish you would decide to come finish this one! Maybe inspiration will hit you again.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/26/2015
Did I detect a small Supernatural referenc from Jason near the end here?
Guest chapter 12 . 7/25/2015
Please continue this! You ended on a cliff hanger! BTW could you please write a Thalia/Annabeth or Thalia/Reyna slash fix or Multichap?
Stars in the Sky at Noon chapter 12 . 7/18/2015
I know you haven't touched this story in almost a year, but I think you've done an amazing job. It's an excellent depiction of how Nico and Jason would bond, without ever straying from either of their personalities. You've captured their perspectives to a perfect T. I didn't use to be a big Jasico fan, but I think this story has totally converted me!
Although I don't want to put pressure on you or anything-we all understand that everyone has busy lives outside of FanFiction, and besides, what you've delivered already has been fantastic-but I really can't wait to see what this quest is all about. Ever since Apollo and Hades visited, there's been so much building anticipation for the new plot twist.
I sincerely hope that you'll continue writing this-either way, I think you deserve a bravo for all the incredible work you've done so far, and kudos for making what I think is one of the best stories taking place after "Heroes of Olympus".
This is a great work of art, and you should be proud of it!
DM chapter 12 . 7/16/2015
You have a talent, this is amazing!
Please continue this the cliffy is too much
Don't leave a brokenhearted Nico and Jason, they need some happiness. :)
Though i must say great job on getting them together
Guest chapter 12 . 5/11/2015
My gods you must continue this! ️
I absolutely love the adorable sibling bond between Jason and Thalia (as well as Thalia and Nico surprisingly) when Jason took the spear for Thalia I got so many feels! ️
Your writing style is fantastic please don't give up on this story! ️
mel-chan1003 chapter 12 . 3/8/2015
This is really cool. I've been meaning to leave a review but never got around to do it, big sorry ;(
I really enjoy this story, hope you're still writing on it :)
Can't wait to read what happens next -
Haibanashi chapter 12 . 11/10/2014
This. This is absolutely beautiful.

First of all, the style and fluency of your writing is captivating and I didn't even realize how long I had been reading this until I looked at the clock and bam! — three hours later.

Aside from the writing itself, the context is amazing. I really love your characterization of Jason; it's a different look on him, but you've set it up and executed it in a way that I don't think I'll ever enjoy as much or see done so perfectly again. And even though we don't get as many looks into Nico's POV, just the way him and Jason interact is enough to provide in depth characterizations that you have portrayed with startling accuracy. It's breathtaking.

I could probably go on and on about how much this enthralls me, but I won't. I truly do hope that you continue to write this. But even now, thank you for putting this out there so that everyone can enjoy and appreciate it. Keep up the great work!
Julie chapter 12 . 10/24/2014
Gaaaah! I love it! Please keep it going! Even if it doesn't go with BoO, I still want to read it! Have you read Blood of Olympus yet? Well I love Nico and Jason in this fic. Thanks for writing! :)
Guest chapter 12 . 8/19/2014
Omfg! This is so fucking good! Update!
2509su chapter 9 . 8/10/2014
I cant believe how realistic this is, every character is just perfect. And knowinf Riordon would never break his couples apart, its really unbelievable how you can write so normally.
I am at chapter 9 and i loved every chapter, i didnt ship Jason and Nico (or Percy and Leo for that matter) but even i found it so normal. You've got a talent, i should say.
And i always hated how people treated Nico so reading Jason like this felt good. Finally, poor kid.
gentleimplosion chapter 12 . 8/8/2014
All of this is canon dammit. You are a wonderful writer, and damn, do I want to know what's going to happen next.
Juliakaze26 chapter 12 . 8/8/2014
I love this story...do update soon
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