Reviews for Betrayal at its worst |
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lilyflower123 chapter 21 . 2/20 Hi my names Lily and I’m a huge fan of yours and I was wondering when you will update the story again because I can’t wait to see Ash and his friends finally kill Tobias/Azazel |
The DragonKnight chapter 1 . 10/29/2019 They dug their own graves by betraying him and sooner or later they'll have to lay in them. |
RiRi14 chapter 5 . 6/6/2019 What about Greninja, Bonnie and Clemont? |
PreloadAL75 chapter 21 . 7/5/2018 I know this review (along with the others) have a low chance to be read, but what the heck, I'll just post it anyways. - Hmmm... It seems like you haven't been updating for a while... What happened? Is 'once a week' THIS LONG? If it is me, I'm sorry that I have accidentally set the system clock of over 50 devices 2 years ahead of time (plus 100 clocks all around the world). If it is you, I suggest you to continue updating, as this fanfic is very interesting and is (currently) one of THE BEST stories I've ever read. The mechanics of the story are well developed, and the plot is, in general, quite matured. If you aren't interested in updating this story, then tell us. Hundreds of future fanfic writers are eager to adopt this story. If you decided to read the reviews, thank you for spending some of your time to understand the wishes and concerns of your fans. If you decided to continue updating... well, there isn't any other way to express how I feel other than to say thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you and thank you for updating! Last but not least, I, as well as all of your fans, are looking forward to seeing you again. |
Dead and gone chapter 20 . 11/5/2017 Dead book makes me sad. |
Lachy chapter 3 . 8/18/2017 is this even about ash anymore? i think you mean Red because i read the last chapter and it was not ash it was red |
Black Lotus15 chapter 21 . 4/23/2017 lol so much for once a week |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/7/2017 Please bring this story back D: |
willow1996 chapter 21 . 2/8/2017 Really good hope you update soon |
Heated Flux chapter 21 . 12/3/2016 What happened to the story? The AN made it look like you were gonna write the next chapter really soon, I've enjoyed this too much for it to just be another unfinished fic. q_q |
Duelboy12 chapter 4 . 11/24/2016 I have two questions one "Why Did Pikachu Turn Into A Rotom?" Two "What Kind Of Pokemon Are You Including Like From Which Regions Kanto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, Unova, And Kalos?" |
DicloniunZero chapter 21 . 11/21/2016 Good story Please don't abandon this story. |
Johnny Spectre chapter 21 . 11/15/2016 let's hope this continues. |
Delta Marauder chapter 21 . 11/15/2016 Please don't abandon this story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2016 Another Soulless and Cliche fic |