Thank you for a great story

Well, that's most of the Horcruxes. Except of course the one at Hogwarts. Fortunately, it SHOULD become a better school now that Fumblemort's no longer Headmaster. But the old buzzed won't truly be gone till he's pushing up daisies. And even then someone better check that the body truly IS Fumblemort! Anyway, good start to the story and I hope your Muse hasn't gone on vacation and left you hanging. Even though it was only two chapters long so far it's still interesting. So thanks for posting it.

I'm not flaming you here but I think you made a slight mistake. Earlier in this chapter, you had Harry tell the Goblins to sell off Grunnings but at the end of the chapter, he tells Ted to get the best accountants to go over the books with a fine-tooth comb. That's something that can be fixed with a little editing. There could be others like that but that's the only one that stuck out to me. Altogether not a bad story. That Fumblemort had to flee the country and live on a small unknown island is much more than he deserves in my opinion.

An excellent quick story. To bad it is not completed!

What?! They were in a magic painting! It wasn't their souls that were present. The paintings never leave. Terrible ending. It sounds as if you didn't know how to end it, so you just left everyone where they were (except for the painting, of course).
In addition you forgot you put Petunia in jail, so she wouldn't be receiving the eviction notice from her cell.
One more problem; It doesn't cost anything to sell an investment other than brokerage fees. So he wouldn't lose money by getting rid of a bad investment. When you sell something you gain whatever you sold it for, even if it isn't what you originally paid for it.

I think you are a better writer than this shows. I hope you continue to develop your talent.

I do not bother to read other readers reviews of an authors work. I make my own mind up as to I like and what I wish to read. You have, in my opinion, a very good story going here. Lots of directions to move the story along via many paths. I find myself wondering what happened to the werewolf potion Harry was going to brew, what will Tom do when he figures out that his anchors are all gone, will Dumasadoor get off the island.
I hope that someday you will write more of this story.
Thanks for writing,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

update please!

I have noticed something that you do that is very helpful to your readers...you start a line that has someone talking and you identify your speaker...Very good...Thank you!

Very good story, hope you continue it sometime.

Loving this story! I am in hopes of your finishing this, its a great story with so much promise...
Thank you for your work continue your writing, you have lots to give if even for your own pleasure and that of your readers...Good Luck!
Looking forward to the next chapters and stories...

What happen next...?! Did albus get whats coming to him..?! Did the wesleys..?!

Awesome! Terrific! Love the idea. Catch that so and so on the island. Why did Fawkes take him away? Fawkes is supposed to be Light.

This is good but there needs to be more

I thought he sold Grunnings?

Oh, I *really* like how this one is going. Yet again, I do hope you'll continue it to the end.