OK I'm a newbie and I'm just throwing this out there I love crossovers and I love this one and what I want to see is jack and sandy getting virtualized and sent to lyoko while bunny and a couple of the lyoko warriors rescue odd and destroy xana and then explanation about the guardians

Please Make more chapters I love this and the first one

ahh thats too bad but I understand been there done that with several stories myself

Ahhh cliffy
Glad the story's progressing this is awesome :D

Xana's plan was good

I think that some tripe of clues should be left to somehow case jerrime to find out about the gardins had his reaction

and for another idea, search ''plot twist generator'' in google! you're bound to get something good!

i might help.

i can't co–write, sadly, but maybe i know a few tricks to get into the writing mood. You could:

•listen to certain music

•reread your story

•read other stories

• do you have connections to other writers? if you do, can you ask for help? can you ask a friiend over to read your story or what you have and ask for pointers?

i've never had writers' block, but this could help.

If you need help try using a few episodes as a base for the chapters instead of making up your own attacks.

Give me some time and I'll pm you when I come with anything helpful.

Hmm... as a suggestion why doesn't XANA go after Odd after seeing how close she is with Jack? Maybe I can help co-write if you'd like...

Pls update!

This is awesome! Don't give up on the saga! If you've run out of ideas, I can help, even if I don't have a Fanfiction account.

interesting friend

When Maria said that Jack knew the reason why a Muse gets directly involved with a mortal and when Jack said Odd was the one the somebody named Isabel chose, what does that mean?

Does that mean she's going to die?