Reviews for White Pills? |
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SamFenton chapter 1 . 6/15/2017 MORE |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2017 Funny |
YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 4/7/2016 Awesome!~~ |
M-chanchen chapter 1 . 4/5/2016 Hi, this is really great. I enjoyed reading it. Well done. But maybe you could write a continuing? For example how the meeting with the headmaster went? I'd really like to read it |
Glory7789 chapter 1 . 5/23/2015 i really need an update on this. i NEED to know what happens! |
Agent Chloe Roets chapter 1 . 2/16/2015 This was so interesting! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good writing! |
InGodIstilltrust chapter 1 . 5/6/2014 Omg so gooooooood! Please write more. Pretty please with double chocolate fudge and a cherry on top! *cue puppy dog eyes with adorable pout* |
ExPlOdInG dOnKeY cUrSe chapter 1 . 1/1/2014 I just thought I'd review to let you know that I really enjoyed your story. I haven't been on the Alex Rider site lately, and that's mainly because I've grown bored with all of these (in my opinion) bad stories floating around out there. Your story was extremely well written and I loved the plot! Excellent job! |
John Allerdyce-Pyro chapter 1 . 12/11/2013 Really good! I'll be checking to see if you have anymore Alex Rider stroies. :) |
DoctorWfan101 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013 I really enjoyed the beginning but I felt the end was unfinished. Though that's probably just me being used to entire novels of this stuff. |
IWannaLightsaber chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 Lol! I liked it. It was fun to read, a bit quirky, and it was cheerful. I do think if you spent a bit more time smoothing out dialogue wrinkles, adding punctuation here and a bit of capitalization there, it would be even better! However, you did good job with the character interactions and with the story plot itself. I enjoyed it, I really did. So thanks! xoxo |
Dragon Courage chapter 1 . 11/13/2013 this was pretty cool, are you planning on continuing it? |
Alexndrine chapter 1 . 11/13/2013 Hey! I just read your text and I liked it, really! Do you want to know how you've done? Truely great! Thanks for this cute and very delightful story :)I hope you're gonna have ispiration for your other stories too, Alexndrine. |
pokes chapter 1 . 11/12/2013 You shjoudl make this a multi chap. Pls? |
greensight chapter 1 . 11/12/2013 You know, this really surprised me. Maybe it was because Alex seemed a little OOC to begin with, or because the idea of him being labelled a druggie by his classmates has been used so many times; I thought it would be clichéd. But the humour! The humour was great! So unexpected, and it worked so well! You should totally write some more little gems like this :) |