I would love to adopt this story, full credit given to your written part, and partial credit to the chapters I write. If to convenience, email me at and we can discus business

Heeeehheheeeehh! You watch Doctor Who too?

I LOVE THIS STORY

That's done I know you won't drop this story!

Hi, I really love your story, but I did want to offer some constructive criticism if that was okay with you? If you are, please continue reading.

So, when you're writing dialect, I think you're using two commas at the beginning like ,,this" but it is supposed to be quotation marks like "this". Two apostrophes even work, though it's easier to use quotation marks.

Sorry, I hate being like this but my grandmother was an English major, my mother is an English major, and my sister was going to be an English major.

Quite frankly, I love the story and the lack of authors notes. It draws more attention to the plot. Keep on writing, it's one of the best AU stories I've ever read.

Ahhh! This story is so cute! Please keep going.

Please update soon! And leave author notes cause' I really want to hear what u think about the story. I don't want u to drop this story without me knowing, but I don't want u to drop this story, period. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE this story!

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Please update soon!

Thanks for the update, please update again soon! :-)

Please, please, please, update I want to see what happens?

Aww!

I really love this story and would love to see it continue! So if you could please update soon!

I love this story! Its seriously one of the best stories i've read. Keep writing your a great writer. Update soon please!