This one is so special - I've read it three times already. The picture you paint of Kate and Castle at the swings - and then with "the little guy" - is just incredibly touching. It's not often that a one chapter story has me crying and smiling but this one certainly did. Loved it!

OMG Rachel, - I can't see the words on the screen due to the falling tears.

So beautiful, so emotionally stirring, beyond touching and I wish I had the poetic words to describe how I'm feeling... Gah! Loooooove

*Only your brilliance could pull this story off so memorably*

you had be worried for a second... but then you pulled back from the abyss and we got a happy ending. well done.

Aw, so sad and scary there for a minute. I'm so glad it turned out okay. Sweet!

Wow. Please write more.

Excellent. Thanks

I was preparing for angst, but so glad it wasn't what I expected! This is lovely :)

Oh that had me on the edge of my seat and yet thankfully had a beautiful ending! An amazing scene to end with!
thanks

So cute. So very cute.

Oh that was so touching. Really well done, I enjoyed this style. The glimpses rather than every detail spelled out. The underlying tenderness, the touches of sadness that were threaded through. Made the relief and joy at the end all the sweeter.

Soo cute! I almost ciried when I thought they had lost the baby, but was really happy that did not. Loved that you used the swings as a way to show the family growing, especially since it is already a symbol for them. Great job!

Oh, and I almost missed it. Beall and Creasey. :-P

Supreme angst and a happy ending. Not an easy balance. Nice work!

very writing.

Thank you - this made me smile! I so wish I could actually visit those swings - they hold such a significant place in my "Castle Sightseeing Tour" .