Wait, so you can still sleep even if there's a GIGANTIC cock (as described from the story) still inside a girl? Won't that hurt when the girl wakes up and the MASSIVE sized cock is still inside?

Dear Gods, that was perfect. Absolutely perfect. Gah!

Wow this was an amazing read!
I liked this a lot. I listened to the video of Tom Hiddleston reading the poem & it was wonderful!
You did a brilliant job of filling in the gaps & giving it more story.

I enjoyed this a lot.
Keep up the good work!

I quite enjoyed this. I have not seen nor heard any of Mr. Hiddleston's readings but I still enjoyed this one-shot.

Nice idea; beautifully written. I hope we get to see more of your work in future.

Thank you for sharing it with us, and most importantly, thank you for pointing us in the direction of that poetry reading... My God (of Mischief)! ;)

Oh that was just fantastic! Weaving the poem in the was wonderful.

Am I the only one who read the E.E. Cummings part in Tom' voice? I really enjoyed it.

I absolutely loved this! UNFF 3

Just great. I love love love that poem. and your story is ... I have no words ... very sexy

Beautiful!

Omg you are amazing. Loved it!

I love this so much!

Hmmmm. Very well done. It was romantic and sexy without being crass. I enjoyed it.

Oh my word- this is brilliant! Beautiful poetry one-shot, you pulled off the inclusion of the lines wonderfully in the plot. You wrote Loki so well and your Reader perspective was the best I've come across in a while. Smashing job! And to quote Thor, "ANOTHER!"