*Sigh* If i knew Natsu was going to be a bitch i would have never read this *Sigh*

Chapter 1 already this hot?
I'm impressed

Wtf ehy would natsu lose to those trash wtffff

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Update

The feels when natsu and rias had an arguement and JUST LIKE THAT! I just wanted to cry when natsu said hes gonna leave then rias hugged him then natsu said that rias doesnt want to see him and it just hit me so much that i dont want to read anymore coz my mind is running much more faster than koro sensei because of the possible ending or what i want to be ending！！

In chess the main goal is to take out the queen, and Natsu's powers don't work like that dragons and dragon-slayers have lived in peace all the time till the war then they could still coexist without dragons no dragon-slayers that's why its only natsu,Gajeel,Wendy,sting and rouge left laxus & cobra only had lacrima so they don't count, the sacred gear should've adapted already so what are you talking about you got a lot of stuff wrong in here but I've been letting it pass, like if natsu could be evenly matched with a Satan why the fallen angles beat him. HOW DOES ISSEI GET THE DRAGON-SLAYING EXCALIBUR THEN!

Ok, esto es basura. Y no me vengas con la mierda de que lanzó llamas. Natsu es jodidamente oc, su poder es más bajo que la mierda, ridiculez tras ridicules sin sentido, una trama de mierda, un issei muerto y con su alma en su puto engranaje, el cual ahora está en natsu porque a algún idota se le ocurrió ponerlo porque si, sin ninguna razón y solo para arruinar aun más esta mierda de fanfic, estoy fuera.

yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooplease updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeez

DUDE THIS STARTED AS AN AWESOME FIC!
BUT.. WHAT HAPPENED MAN? IF YOUR'E TAKING AWAY HIS DRAGONSLAYER MAGIC .. YOUR'E BASICALLY TAKING THE *NATSU, OUT OF NATSU,-a big part of him too.
AT LEAST MAKE IT HAPPEN THAT THERE IS SOMEONE OUT THERE TO HELP HIM TRAIN TO MERGED THOSE TWO POWERS AGAIN... cuz just saying my honest opinion here it's becoming boring and stale fanfic and his completely becoming an Issie, I THOUGHT THEY WERE TWO OF THEM NOT JUST! ISSEI.. PLSS MAKE IT BETTER.. CUZ THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST ENTERTAINING FANFIC I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME.

I'm really liking your story, but I disagree with the whole dragon slaying not being compatible thing. Dragon slaying works by turning the user pretty much into a humanoid dragon. If anything Natsu should be super compatible with ddraig.

please continue

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I hope Natsu'll be able to combine the power of his sacred gear and dragon slaying magic and defeat Raiser in the rating game, which of course doesn't happen in most of the fics I read. First they would lose the rating game by one way or another and then break the marriage after crashing the party and have a rematch. It would be good to see a change if they win the rating game. But its your story and the plot is yours, I'm just sharing my point of view and this story is really good.

UPDATE THIS mothafucka