Props to your for the best author who can turn a story to tragic to fluffy to downright horrific to mellow to an unexplainable thrill.

(did that make sense? Oh well ;)

This was the first vocaloid fan fiction I ever read. I came back to feel the nostalgia and noticed the final chapter. BEAUTIFUL. Excellent work sir. I congratulate you.

Wonderfully written. I even cried a couple of times.

I should be doing homework, but instead, I'm bawling my eyes out on this fanfiction. It's so beautiful, well-written and I'm really happy that it's not just the next disturbing twincest (Because this is all I ever find whenever I search for Rin and Len family fics, I'm not really a RxL shipper.) Great job, really worth reading.

Hmmm. I... don't know what to say, actually, but did you update the two chapters at the same time? I'm going to review the ninth one first, then.

I don't hate Len, not the slightest. I just see him as a troubled boy, that's it. Then to the chapter, that part when Len looked into the mirror and smirked is amusing, hahahaha. The whole chasing Rin scene, and Len putting Lenka in the basement (and her reaction after that is nice, in some ways). When they were in the computer world... thing (whatever that is), though, that was really emotional—saddening but happy at the same time, and emotional... It was such a happy and touching moment. I'm out of words, but to put all of it, a nice job you have made there!

Then to the last chapter, it's good that Len and Lenka got back together, and Len becoming a great good guy (is that how you put it?) The half-happy ending was rather... I feel that the story is still hanging. Actually the end suggests that it was all happy ending, but then you mentioned the ending is Kokoro... and the moment is ruined. Not that I hate the ending, it's still nice (and I got the idea that Len is somewhat obsessed with Rin because he made the robot. I just can't help it).

Ah, this story is so worth reading, thank you. It deserves my love (favorite) ( ) Maybe that's all, once again, great job on making this!

WWWWWAAAAAHHHHH! KAGAMINE LEN YOU BETTER NOT BE DEAD! Really a cliff hanger! This fic is awesome!

Oh God, I love this story! :) I love the emotion and the drama! :D And, ooh, the ending! THAT. WAS. AWESOME.

Soundless voice and proof of life? :o

-whatgoesupgoesdown

Mentally crying now!-de chi!

Albinism isn't THAT strange of a condition. *murdered mercilessly for being a dick*
*strangled noises* Sorry I missed reviewing again! Also I need to respond to all the reviews on the thingy I wrote. Ehe.
Wow Rin's become such a jerk noe that she's all malfunctiony. Like she says she's trying to protect Len but then she almost gets him raped. Geez.
That sucks that Rin killed herself, but why was she so depressed? D:
I'd actually be pretty creeped out if my dead sibling wrote me a message like Ted did. Like, that's nice and all that they're watching over me, but how long have you been there?

This is so sad! Update!

Update!

His took a surprising turn... I LOVE IT! Poor Len and WHAT THE HECK RIN WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT! It was a bit odd to see luka as... That - still this was an amazing chapter keep it up!

Oh my gosh, please, let's have a happy ending! Where everything works out for everyone, and they're all happy...

But it's really good! It's something to make me write something sentimental like that! Please update! XD

Rin! What did you do to Len's life?!
You made me cry before but...im scared of you!
(Rin does red eyes face)
AAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHHHH! DON'T KILL ME! x Thanks x
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