Jaune: I got this I just need to believe!
*Jaune walks into the School, noticing it is pitch black*
Jaune: Dang it, I forgot Faunus had night vision.

This is the funniest God damn jaune fic I've ever read. It was hella confusing at first when Ren was like Miltia doesnt exist until like the JauneCardin convo in the city and there were big (but few) POV jumps with minimal context but it still works. Honestly tho, the comedic timing and characters are God tier. With a AU like this it's easy to go OOC but I never felt it. Like this is as funny as Professor Arc.. Like I've never gone back to re-read parts and still keel over.

split personality or a ghost.
or semblece

Dude this is amazing please continue it

You know in just gonna put this in here cahae I kept forgetting but who is the horse zodiac?

Great story.

HES A FUCKING LEMMING? HAHAHAHA OH MY GOD YES.

PLEASE COME BACK TO FINISH THIS! this is one of the best fanfic on RWBY here, it has so much interesting stuff and original turns in it...

Yay, an update on one of my favorite RWBY stories!

...im so confused,when talk of politics started everything became a clusterfuck for me.

I'm anticipating when Jaune's identity as a human is revealed to all his friends. I really want to know what happens!

Just picked led up this story a few days ago and couldn't put it down. I have to admit, you are a master at tugging everyone around on an emotional AL roller coaster ride. I can't decide if I hate everyone or like everyone. There's too much chaos going on surrounding Jaune, and it's Game of Thrones all over again when you consider the vicious murder fest that's going to happen eventually. And worse off is it seems that everyone wants to kill Jaune in some way shape or form. I'm getting the vibe that Blame and Weiss will expose him to generate a malicious response, Melanie and Militia will try to capture him for future experimentation since he's such an anomaly, and Yang's pack will end up murdering him and everyone else just so she can have (Darth Sidious) UNLIMITED POWER! Ahem. The only person who I don't outright hate for their constant will kill, will not kill, attitude is Ruby because it feels almost like she's as much a pawn in all this as Jaune is, just that Yang is using her as Blake is using Jaune. Neither wants to be used, but they're unkowingly or partially knowingly being manipulatede by everyone around them. Ugggh I'm so confused and dumb brain hurt now. Still, this mystery element of loyalty vs fuckery is in a way masterful and I love the humor you inject into it as well. The crossover ish elements are a little off putting but they're so insignificant, or well fleshed out and contributing to the comedy that it's actually enjoyable here when I'd normally find it annoying or immature. Good job with what you've done here so far, and I look forward to reading more from you! :) Good luck, take care, and have a very Merry Christmas!

Great story want more!

"they're in lesbians"

"Can't wait for Jaune to show these emperor dammed mutants why it is humanity that rules this planet, you must let them see the might human kind. But do not forget that a proper soldier of humanity must also show our never-ending mercy, let them know their choice, that they can either submit to the righteous authority of humans... or be put down." Inquisitor Robert Ceiami